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eloheitzvaot20dCommentedThnn/than.
"Let's run." Karvon suddenly shot forwards followed by Juliet and Silas didn't even know what to do and just followed, putting all of his chi into his legs and body, he felt lighter thnn before and as they passed, giant flying bugs from the sides and above came through towards them and then they all chased after the people who were trespassing in their area.- eloheitzvaot20dCommented
Decapitated/ dismember.
Meanwhile, a shadow which was on the ground moved at the same speed towards the ape and then the ape's right arm was suddenly decapitated and then it roared out loud in pain and it spun it's second arm around. - eloheitzvaot20dCommented
Priorities ...
"I found some snacks!" Talon exclaimed excitedly as he pulled out bags of chips, candies, and other snacks that he found in the fridge. "These look really nice. Want some?" - eloheitzvaot20dCommented
Lex/Dante
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her
4. Fasit - The leader of the grygans, representing his people and their interests in negotiations with other races. - eloheitzvaot25dCommented
Happy wife, happy life.
He could feel the skies darkening as Serena's power coursed through him. He lay on the ground, dazed, and muttered to himself, "Note to self: never piss off Serena." - eloheitzvaot26dCommented
Hmmm...
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LOL!!!
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Mentality is wrong. OG networking. "Through marriage is how the tribe is strengthened."(House, Clan, Tribe.)
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There/They, here/hear.
"There are many children who take this tournament seriously. They are a lot of scouts hear for professional teams who are looking for the next Gem, and you could have ruined that kid's chance." - eloheitzvaot1mthCommented
Novis not Alex.
Alex was thinking if his comment really could affect the match that much, then he must be someone special. If they were to meet in the future Alex was sure to want the kid on his team. - eloheitzvaot1mthCommented
Their instead of there(location).
"Yes, there are so many children here. I can see it in there eyes. These children have the same passion to improve their sword skills as I did. With this, it gives me hope to believe that swordsmanship will always exist in one way or another." - eloheitzvaot1mthCommented
Higher word count vs. grammar flowing properly. "was".
"Oh teacher, I was meant to ask, have you ever heard of a swordsman named Arthur Pendragon?" - eloheitzvaot1mthCommented
there instead of they.
Paul began to demonstrate the skills. The first time he displayed attacks using the system. Each time he went from one skill to the next they would be a slight pause. Then paul demonstrated the same skills without using the system. - eloheitzvaot1mthReplied to Ceaseless_Voices
Can't beat a Tacoma or Hilux for quality.
Four reasons: One, the price is moderate; Two, many netizens say the safety performance of this car is very good; Three, the appearance is decent, not ugly, and durable; Four, it's readily available. - eloheitzvaot1mthCommented
That's what happens if you drink too much .
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minced meat = ground beef
I put some rice in the rice-maker, and began to cut the onions, garlic, and colorful pepper into tiny pieces, which I mixed with the minced meat. - eloheitzvaot5mthCommented
And we'll deserved.
Ruguan stood there dumbstruck, his hand frozen stiff in mid-air. The humiliation was real. - eloheitzvaot5mthCommented
Part of the anointing ceremony for high priest
She lowered her exquisite face further, pressing a gentle kiss upon Bryan's right toe. - eloheitzvaot5mthCommented
Great way to get STDs.
In his view, spending 50 StellaCoins on fishing gear wasn't as worthwhile as spending it on a good time with a lady of the night.