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Freako23235dCommentedmine was natasha, as she was the only sustain I had until very recently
Apparently my most used unit in the entire year was Fu Xuan which I felt was understandable since she's my sustain. But I felt like Kafka should have overtaken her.- Freako23231mthCommented
I’ve been enjoying the ai actually, it is a little yandere, which is fun
I know people are getting annoyed at the AI. I'm just setting it up for something, nothing to bad or too major and would probably be covered in less than a quarter of a chapter around chapter 60plus or something. Thanks for your patience. - Freako23231mthCommented
the cocept is very interesting, but it would take some serious balancing of how many stones things cost, especially with how stones get tossed between stories. You might even have to make prices of stuff variable depending on how many stones the story is getting
1) Marvel world, rebirth in 1970 (he will be born this year), There will be a system shop, but the volute will be your stones, so his power will depend on you. Accordingly, four walls will be broken. In general, a very complex fanfic but I think the idea is very cool. (nowhere I have not seen such a thing). But I'm worried that now in the top there is a fanfic to which everyone gives stones, so the whole concept may break. Just a super soldier serum would cost about 10000 stones, post an opinion (I'm really interested). - Freako23232mthCommented
honestly, set one up, even if some of us are too broke to join atm(me). Some people will gladly join, and your writing is quite solid.
(The multiple chapter days I have been doing are going to end soon. I have been talking with my Father and he is pushing me to start a Patreon. in this economy, even an old-school guy like my Father sees the benefit of some extra money from my hobby. I will see what I can do about starting a Discord as well. - Freako23232mthCommented
I have been reading that on Royal Road as well, loving it
Positive note: I recently started reading a fantastic story called "Ghost in the City" over on Archive of Our Own. It's a Cyberpunk 2077 story with some Ghost in the Shell references (not a true crossover) and some gamer elements from the game. Seras0 is a far superior author to me and updates regularly. Go check it out if it sounds interesting. - Freako23233mthCommented
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I bring down the sword in a perfect vertical line right in front of me. - Freako23234mthCommented
steins:gate?
"I was stuck in a Time Loop, and I was trying to change the ending. Yet it wasn't working out. No matter what I did it just… didn't work. The ending was unavoidable. I began to smoke these magical cigars back then, which kept me calm through the research and everything. It was a hard habit to get rid of. It's funny seeing my 'disciple' do that same thing as me." - Freako23234mthReplied to Myth_Reader
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"As a member of the Fang family, we will have lots of chaos around us, but that can be exploited," Danny nagged when he appeared in front of Michael, "You have to make use of your territory's protection barrier when you enter the Origin Expanse. It lasts only ten days but that should be more than enough for you!" - Freako23234mthCommented
The story had a good start to it honestly, and I kind of enjoy you being able to hint at things from the past and introduce them whenever you want, like with his sister Lucy, I thought it added more to the story when we didn’t already know about her until she showed up
Option 2 - Continue as it is. - Freako23235mthPosted
The Concept is something that I really like, especially with his ability and trauma system. The more scientific nature of the story is interesting and makes it interesting. It also reminds me a lot of a story called “Swallowed Star” that is very good and has a number of similarities in my mind. However, the writing quality has some odd wording at times, and it seems like there are several missing chapters that just were skipped over and you will suddenly find yourself in a whole different place with no idea of what happened between the two points. Which is a huge negative to the flow of the story, and some stuff also ends us feeling very stretched out. There is not a huge amount of early world building and it leaves much to be desired in that regard, as if stuff is just getting made up as it goes.
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oh golly that’s a bunch
"I'm posting, any mistakes I may make, please leave them in the comments. It's almost 50k words." - Freako23236mthCommentedCh 11 Respite and Revelation
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I would say to have this after the other two arcs, or put this between important dc event and one piece, that way whiever the waifu is can possibly gain something from one piece as well
-> Let him go to Bleach and finally get his waifu and weapon. Please note that the Bleach Arc, no matter when it is, will be rather long. I have some things I want Hades to do there. - Freako23236mthCommented
I quite like how you’re doing it, having a well thought out design is important when building or putting together anything
I know that a lot of you don't like this and I understand. But I don't care that much, to be honest. I put a lot of thought into it. - Freako23236mthCommented
scathach from fate?
Another one will be this: The person who can guess from which world his love interest will be from, I will name one of his children after you. Hahahaha, that sounds so stupid. - Freako23237mthCommented
Where else do you post? I just use WN cuz their app is pretty good
From now on, there will be no updates on WN. I will only post the chapters where Harry will be giving a beat down to someone significant.