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Sage_Insanity9 months ago
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Makes up the powers of tactile telekinesis as they go along, chapters have terrible grammar, story progresses like sh!t.
Young Justice: Unbreakable Allies
Anime & Comics · dean_winchester_1261
Sage_Insanitya year ago
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Change “my” with “his”
The mysterious encounter with the door left my thoughts in chaos. Questions swirled in my mind—what was that door? Who was that being? Are those the memories of that being?
The Star God Of Ancient.
Fantasy · Mukesh_Dhami
Sage_Insanitya year ago
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He walked ahead to open the door. Pushing it, he found the door wouldn’t even budge. ‘It seems just pushing it won’t do.’ Eric observed.
"I walked ahead to open the door, pushing it, but the door didn't even budge. It seems stuck and wouldn't open with just pushing," Eric observed.
The Star God Of Ancient.
Fantasy · Mukesh_Dhami
Sage_Insanitya year ago
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Spacing needs to be looked at
The next day. Changping Magical Equipment Research Institute. Under Chen Daochu's guidance, Chen Daoxuan began to tour the greatly changed Magical Equipment Research Institute. Compared to a few months ago. The Chen family's magical equipment research institute had a lot of new staff. Chen Daoxuan saw many new faces when he entered the Magical Equipment Research Institute. He knew that they were all potential refiners selected from Changping Cultivation Primary School. Chen Daoxuan nodded as he looked at the crowd moving through the buildings. He turned to Chen Daochu and said,""Finally, it's starting to look good." "Hehe," Chen Daochu smiled foolishly." After so long, wouldn't I be disappointing you if there's no effect at all?" "That's enough," Chen Daoxuan pointed at the cultivators of the 'luck' generation and said with a smile," Whether it's effective or not doesn't depend on these superficial skills." "I know," Chen Daochu nodded." Young Clan Leader, this way please!" As he spoke, he made an inviting gesture. Hearing this. Chen Daoxuan nodded and walked with Chen Daochu to the largest magical equipment laboratory in the research institute. As the two of them entered the spacious laboratory. Chen Daoxuan discovered that there were puppet monsters of various grades everywhere in the laboratory. From the lowest low-grade level one to the highest low-grade level three, there was everything. "Good fellow," Chen Daoxuan stared blankly at the lower-grade level-three puppet monster that had been dismantled in front of him. He muttered," Lower-grade level-three puppet? How did your Magical Equipment Research Institute get your hands on it?" "Of course I bought it!" Chen Daochu said matter-of-factly," How can research not cost money? If he wanted to completely understand the principle of the Spirit Control Array, dismantling the puppets was a must!" Hearing this. The corner of Chen Daoxuan's mouth couldn't help but twitch. He nodded and said,""You're right! I hope your research results are worthy of the family's investment." Unexpectedly, Chen Daochu said confidently,""Young Clan Leader, if we still can't figure out the principle of the spiritual control formation even after you have provided us with the inheritance of the puppet technique and dismantled so many puppets, then our Magical Equipment Research Institute is too useless!" "Alright, stop bragging. Let me see your research results!" "Alright." Chen Daochu nodded and waved at a cultivator of the Fu generation beside him. Immediately after. A strange-looking magic tool was carried over. Chen Daochu pointed at the magic tool in front of him and said,""Young Clan Leader, please take a look." Hearing this. Chen Daoxuan looked at the strange magic tool in front of him and asked,""This is the result of your research?" "That's right!" Chen Daochu said excitedly," Don't underestimate this thing. You know that Puppet Monsters can cast spells, right?" Chen Daoxuan nodded. "Then do you know why Puppet Monsters can cast spells?" Hearing this, Chen Daoxuan frowned. Although he had exchanged his battle merits from the Qian Yuan Sword Sect for the first and second level of the Puppet Art Inheritance, he had never studied the Puppet Art. Therefore, he did not know why the Puppet Monster could cast spells at will. Normally. Only cultivators had the ability to cast spells at will. Although the spells cast by the puppet beasts were flawed and could only be predicted in advance, they could not be controlled by the divine sense after being released like the spells cast by cultivators. However, on a large-scale battlefield. Puppet Monsters were very useful as cannon fodder. Other than being cannon fodder, they could also suppress the enemy with firepower. In the battlefield of the Yun Nation, the puppet beasts that the Profound Pure Dao League had bought from the Thousand Engineering Palace had caused a lot of trouble for the cultivators of the Infinite Star Sea. Although it was a one-on-one battle. Cultivators weren't afraid of puppet beasts, but once these things were on a large scale and formed a fire coverage, no matter how agile the cultivator was, there was no other way than to take the damage head-on. It was impossible for everyone to teleport on the battlefield like the Sea Suppressing Palace Hall Master, right? If the cultivators of the Infinite Star Sea had the ability to do so, they would have unified the human race long ago. Why would they have fought for 400 years without even taking down the Yun Nation? Finally seeing the confusion on Chen Daoxuan's face, Chen Daochu seemed to be greatly encouraged. He said excitedly,"It's because of the spirit control array!" He paused for a moment." Although the spirit control array is called an array, it is actually a special container for storing magic dao patterns. Young Clan Leader, please take a look!" Chen Daochu took out the head of a leopard puppet monster. " The Thousand Engineering Palace has engraved the first-level spell, Wind Blade, in this place and sealed it in the spiritual control array. When the puppet monster receives the order of its master or has a pre-set attack order, it will attack the enemy automatically!" Chen Daochu pried open the leopard-shaped puppet monster's mouth." Young Clan Leader, look. After the spirit control array replicated the sealed spell dao pattern, it spat it out through the leopard's mouth." Chen Daochu injected his Quintessential Essence into the leopard puppet monster's mouth. In its open mouth, a wind blade was slowly forming. Chen Daoxuan saw it even more clearly. He noticed that when Chen Daochu injected his True Essence, a spell dao pattern was forming in the Puppet Monster's mouth. "This is the copy you mentioned!" "Yes!" Chen Daochu, who had studied it thoroughly, nodded in admiration." I have to say that the Qianji Palace is really creative. Spirit control array! Spell Dao Pattern! I've never heard of these things in the Infinite Star Sea, but they can do it." "Very imaginative." Chen Daoxuan praised sincerely. This world was never lacking in geniuses. He would not underestimate the people of the world just because he had created a few new magical artifacts by relying on the ability of the Primordial Enlightenment Scripture to store comprehension.
Family Cultivation: I Can Store My Ability To Understand
Eastern · Little White to Old White
Sage_Insanitya year ago
Replied to BlkM5k
Be quit
It couldn't be considered "rich" in terms of resource level.
Deities: Starting From Goblins
Games · Gray Ashes
Sage_Insanitya year ago
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SMASH
SMASH:
DC: with D&D Artificer
TV · Lythan_Page
Sage_Insanitya year ago
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You need artificial limbs to be a weapon shifter
Ch 23 looting star laps [chapter 24]
DC: with D&D Artificer
TV · Lythan_Page
Sage_Insanitya year ago
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Drive knights shapeshifting box (one punchman)
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DC: with D&D Artificer
TV · Lythan_Page
Sage_Insanitya year ago
Replied to Ozonelayer
That’ not an odachi
I was about to question Great-grandmother on how she healed my wrist, but it didn't seem like the sword was finished, as the Ōdachi started shrinking in size till it was the same height as me, then the hilt changed from black to purple along with a black tassel hanging on the end of the hilt.
Elven Legacy
Fantasy · Ozonelayer
Sage_Insanitya year ago
Replied to Lord_of_Shadows
Owls are not slow
The birds were all eager to send to message for him but a small pigmy owl got the privilege due to being bolder than the rest and snatching the letter out of Nick's hand and flying off. He got a good laugh out of the situation as the other birds looked shocked at how bold the small bird was. Honestly Nick hated sending messages by owl as he always had to disappoint a bunch of them when he chose one to deliver it so him not needing to choose worked just fine for him.-
Harry potter: The ringmaker
Book&Literature · loskro