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CarolinaWuChen

CarolinaWuChen

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I like reading and being alone

2018-01-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Posted

    Average 🙂 lots of grammar mistakes and logical issues. Definitely in need of a good editor or proofreader. ........................................

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    Doomsday Pillars
    Sci-fi ¡ Avan
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Commented

    Theres a lot of grammar problems

    Ch 21 Free Lunch
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    Doomsday Pillars
    Sci-fi ¡ Avan
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Commented

    FINALLY YAY THANK YOU AUTHOR

    Lost costs don't break us even, not in this forgotten paradise.
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    Queen of the Castaway Isle
    Horror ¡ CCmei
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Posted

    MEDIOCRE INTERESTING BUT NOT WELL WRITTEN some things arent thorOughly explained author tried to do so much that its poorly executed character design isnt too bad though

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    Rebirth Of The Apocalypse Queen: On Your Knees, Young Emperor!
    Sci-fi ¡ The Glass Pearl
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Commented

    Its good

    Ch 1 Getting tired and getting old
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    Rebound: A 2nd Chance
    Sports ¡ The_Gaji
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Posted

    I think the author has really written an excellent novel here. Its a bit depressing when i read the flashbacks but i love the storyline characters and pace of the story so far. Just wish there were more chapters.

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    Queen of the Castaway Isle
    Horror ¡ CCmei
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Commented

    We get it its repetitive

    By then, however, she had lost everything she ever wanted to keep safe.
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    Queen of the Castaway Isle
    Horror ¡ CCmei
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Commented

    We get it shEs traumatized

    Since she's been rescued and brought back to the mainland it was if her emotions had dulled. It was either too much or nothing at all. Her insanity only went two ways where it felt as if the pain was tearing her alive from the inside or it would be that hollow echo where time stretches into days of nothingness. It was only after years of intesive therapy and the patience of her friends and family that she regained her sense and ability to feel.
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    Queen of the Castaway Isle
    Horror ¡ CCmei
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  • CarolinaWuChen
    CarolinaWuChen3yr
    Posted

    -NOT GOOD -DIFFICULT TO UNDERSTAND -NOTHING IS THOROUGHLY EXPLAINED -THE WORLD BUILDING IS JUST BAD -U FINISH FEELING CONFUSED MORE THAN HALF the time

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    Master of the End Times
    Sci-fi ¡ Little Word Qin
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