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GeneralAverage

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Someday I want to earn money by making novels as a job.

2018-01-15 JoinedPhilippines
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    GeneralAverage1yr
    Replied to Sweatysausage

    Ooh, I didn't see this one when I was editing. Thank you for noticing!

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  • GeneralAverage
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    Replied to Sweatysausage

    Thanks for noticing! I will fix it soon!

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  • GeneralAverage
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    Replied to HL0426

    During the break I gained a rough idea about where I want to take the story, thanks for asking!

    Ch 66 Chapter 66: Lurking in the Dark I
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    GeneralAverage1yr
    Replied to JesusXChrist

    Stay tuned to find out!

    Chapter 1: Son of the Ravenmoon I
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    Replied to AC_BA

    Right, it's a typo. Thanks for noticing!

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  • GeneralAverage
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 41 41 - The Plan That She Disliked
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    Replied to _KAIZER_

    We will see!

    Ch 38 Chapter 38: Transcendence III
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  • GeneralAverage
    GeneralAverage1yr
    Replied to AidenPierce72

    Hello! Thank you for reading. The ranks will be explained in the later chapters.

    Ch 32 Chapter 32: Into the Wildlands II
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  • GeneralAverage
    GeneralAverage1yr
    Replied to Ayoub_Annabi

    Hello! The protagonist is originally Albert but he was forced to play as his twin brother Herbert. Before he had transmigrated, he was also named Albert.

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: Featherwing Fortress IV
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  • GeneralAverage
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    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 31 31 - Two-Man Team
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    "there is need to no rush" = there is no need to rush

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  • GeneralAverage
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    The world has a lot of untapped potential and seems very interesting. The characters are very lively and charming. Although it utilizes the common protagonist tropes of having dead parents with a motivation for revenge, the cliche is good and the sadness is balanced by the occasional heartwarming scenes.

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  • GeneralAverage
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    Hello! Author here. Thank you to everyone that had commented, voted, and added to their collection. I hope you had a fun experience reading my third try at writing a novel. This time I hope to finish it properly without going on hiatus. I originally wanted to write a self-review when I reached chapter 50, but it seems like the novel has been getting some attention so here it is. I have also noticed that there had been a lot of questions so this will also be a FAQ corner. Q. Who actually is the protagonist, is he Herbert or Albert? A: The protagonist is originally Albert but he was forced to play as his brother Herbert. Before he had transmigrated, he was also named Albert. Q: Is this a harem? A: No, although there will be other potential love interests, I intend to have mc end up with one. This will also make sense thematically due to how low the chance will be for a child to be born when two parents are of not the same grade of bloodline. This brings the question, would it make sense to have a strong and capable descendant with a high grade of bloodline or multiple weak descendants with a low-grade bloodline? Q: Why is the mc not acting like a villain? A: Just because your mother called you handsome doesn't mean that you are one. I originally created the mc to feel more human, and this resulted in him having more flaws as a character. Q: Why is the mc's focus on politics rather than his personal strength? A: The Ravenmoon protocol for enemies is either to contain or kill. He is facing off against the protagonist, he understands that his current character template isn't enough to catch up to the plot armor standards that the protagonist has so he could only try to change to overpower the protagonist in a different way. Q: Is the mc braindead to give away treasures to others? A: If you have a million dollars and you know that someone has the potential to pay you back twice the amount, would you not invest?

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  • GeneralAverage
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    Replied to HK007

    The Mc is originally Albert acting as Herbert. Originally, he was also named Albert before the transmigration too.

    Ch 22 Chapter 22: Painting II
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  • GeneralAverage
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    Replied to Radpiplup

    Hello! No, this isn't a harem. Enjoy reading!

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Son of the Ravenmoon I
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  • GeneralAverage
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    Replied to Ashborn1609

    There will be other potential romantic interests, but Herbert will only end up with one. Unless it is by popular demand, I dont see myself changing my mind anytime soon. Thanks for reading!

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Son of the Ravenmoon II
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  • GeneralAverage
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    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 25 25 - Question
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  • GeneralAverage
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    Commented

    You thought the main character is Kairo? It's actually Grisia!!!

    Ch 17 17 - Merchant Test
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  • GeneralAverage
    GeneralAverage1yr
    Replied to Leo_Bassist

    Hello, thank you for reading! The novel will be updated at 8:00 pm everyday UTC+08:00 time. There are a lot of stockpiled chapters so please stay tuned!

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Son of the Ravenmoon II
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