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pretty good but pacing is a little slow. not for those who are used to quick OP MC. this author takes people on arcs and it can get quite frustrating to see the MC keep getting into situations and being unfairly treated without any glory to speak of when he overcomes. this is reading more than 150chapters in. pretty good if you are a patient reader but not recommended if you want an OP MC immediately
great story writing. loved the way the author actually developed the character and fits him into the world. it does help that the world building is based on our footballing world so it's easier to build the story. only grouse I have is the author actually sets privilege for too long before release. it's almost for 1 month before you see the privileged chapters coming out, making it seem like author is hard up for it.
pretty good in the beginning but the MC is an absolute idiot who hides his identity all the time even when there is no need to. He can't be considered cowardly as he would fight enemies as long as his identity isn't revealed. definitely not your typical MC OP in your face kinda novel. MC is OP alright but it starts getting irksome later on when he keeps trying to stay low profile in the belief that there is always stronger enemies out there and the only way to ensure survival is to stay anonymous. that was the biggest character flaw in the MC. Other than that, it's pretty decent storyline as I read the raws up to 600+
Venice has no king, they had councils and a doge