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Binge Reader. ROB Cliche hater. I hate NTR with a passion. Fav Author: CORNBRINGER & AStoryForOne. Fav FF: DC: DON'T UTTER A WORD & A Nascent Kaleidoscope. Fav OG: Release that Witch & RDLK

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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Replied to IQuakeI_V

    Thanks. Good to know.

    Ch 40 Chapter 16 (Part 3)
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    Cyberpunk - The Fall of Icarus
    Anime & Comics · amattsu
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    Will the story keep its narrative story telling? Will the author finally write interactions with important characters? We haven't even have an interaction with V. I want to be straightforward and sorry if I might come off as rude but the story kinda feels boring and lackluster. Imagine a city like night city but without the people, that's how I feel the story is like, the world building is actually amazing as well as the MCs power growth, but without character interactions that seems to being breeze through and only being told in a narrative, not being showed the story feels grey without color.

    Ch 40 Chapter 16 (Part 3)
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    Cyberpunk - The Fall of Icarus
    Anime & Comics · amattsu
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    Do you mind providing a comparison statwise? say eraserhead since without his quirk he is the most likely humanlike in terms of stats. 2 ton weight is bit underwhelming considering the stats were above 200 + the herculean perk itself

    1. Incredible Lifting Capacity: You can lift and manipulate objects that weigh up to 2 tons, allowing you to hoist cars, boulders, and other massive objects.
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    MHA: Izuku Reloaded
    Anime & Comics · TenseiNovels
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    I would really love to read a cynthia pov or chapter in the future! Even one of the pokemons is fine too!

    Ch 26 Chapter 26: Old Woman's Wrath
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    Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Posted

    Writing quality is 5☆. Too many pokemon fanfiction these days are too serious, too dark, and too complex. This story though is very light hearted and reflects the overall atmosphere of a fun Pokemon adventure. I particularly like the chemistry of the mc and cynthia both not overshadowing but rather compliment each other. The battles are easy to picture though lacking in suspense though understable since its still too early in the story. Overall a good story that I would recommend reading if you want something light and fun pokemon fanfic, oh also if you like cynthia, definitely this story is for you!

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    Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    Parents profession could have been professional milk runners

    While none of the 4 took it seriously, they knew they were in the wrong. The 4 could only go into the lab to find their children. But when they approached the inner room, they found the two kids sleeping together on a couch with their eggs in their hands.
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    Twins of Diamond and Pearl (Poke Fic)
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Posted

    One of the better ones in fanfiction in terms of writing. Bit on the slow side might say, but the worldbuilding covers up this slowness and keeps the story interesting. What makes it iffy for me is that some important story developments are being breeze through and just being told in a narration. Thus somehow in my opinion the story sometimes leans more like a biography or a diary. Though it feels like the story is still being set up in the 20+ chapters I have read and might be improved later. Overall, its worth a try in reading!

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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    Another important meeting/story development being breeze through. Will this go on to the whole story? This is leaning more towards biography/diary with this lacking character interactions.

    One of the "Backer" clan members shared stories of their life and customs as the community members installed the machine, answering my questions. I didn't ask many, mostly about daily life and responsibilities within such families. A child about my age, Vincent, ran around near John, the nomad. Vincent wasn't very sociable and only gave me his initial when I asked his full name. His father just laughed at his son's behavior, calling him by his name, which made him puff up in annoyance. The little conspirator then started questioning me, while others, swearing in various ways, tried to install the machine. Susan saved me from this "interrogation" by asking me to come and help with setting up the device, for which I was grateful.
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    integrate switching pov. The pacing is too fast that it makes volleyball chapter boring. Make it interesting by letting the reader get to know other characters. You've done it once with Kageyama, surely you could do it again. Switching pov can also be used to hype up your MC and make tense situations to spice things up. Other than Mahiru the characters of Haikyuu is really bland, as a reader I would like to know the characters take on the MC.

    Describing a volleyball game is pretty hard lol. Peacu
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    The Angel Spoils Me On My Way To The Top
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    Realistically, Tanaka should replace Hinata imo. Tanaka is much taller and can be used both in offense and defense. Hinata might have quick reflexes and strong jump but this early in the story I think he is much less of value in the team comp, specially since Haruto exist. Hinata can be used for surprise play to earn easy points but still highly likely to be stopped by taller players if read properly.

    "This may be the regular lineup for now but anyone on the team if they put in the hard work they can take a spot in the starting lineup. I believe that each of you have the potential to be on the starting lineup so the current regulars you better keep up the effort or else your spot will be taken by someone who wants it more than you."
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    The Angel Spoils Me On My Way To The Top
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU1mth
    Commented

    NGL. The volleyball chapters is not really entertaining. The games lack depth and there is no sense of tension since everything is just described. There is a rather lack of WOW factor for the MCs skills even when he was supposed to be blessed by a ROB. Should have just created a story without ROB since your character would be more prone for criticisms and readers would set higher expectations. This is why I despise ROB cliches as it more often not utilize properly and would soon be forgotten, like just start the story as an OC in a haikyuu world with Mahiru. Romance is done well and heroine is a develop characters. Can't say for sure to the Haikyuu's characters, they felt bland.

    Ch 18 Karasuno Team Achieved
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    The Angel Spoils Me On My Way To The Top
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU4mth
    Replied to Almostaslave

    Ah, thanks for the clarification. You do great work, thanks for translating and editing.

    Ch 1 01 - Regression
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    Villain: Hero's wishes are doubled
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU4mth
    Commented

    Might I ask if this is a translated fanfiction or a translated satiric-parody story of Chinese urban novel elements? Since it is listed in the fanfiction category, might I also ask which stories are to be expected to appear?

    Ch 1 01 - Regression
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    Villain: Hero's wishes are doubled
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Commented

    Still readable but quality-wise its degrading to MTL. Slow updates are fine as long as the quality of the flow of the story is not affected. Quality over quantity please.

    Ch 91 -90- Reunion
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    Arcane: Champion Witness System
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Commented

    Thank you for coming back! Hope you enjoy your new PC.

    Ch 122 Malorian Firearms, Inc
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    Cyberpunk: Arasaka Secret Son
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Commented

    yes

    Yes.
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    A Narcissist's Rebirth
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Replied to Jhunior_ll

    No rush boss hope you can atleast play phantom liberty in your new pc and gain inspiration.

    Ch 121 The Visit II
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    Cyberpunk: Arasaka Secret Son
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Commented

    Nice chapter. Thanks for the release!

    Ch 45 Chapter 45: Her Existence
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    Arifureta: God of Extinction
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Commented

    Binge for two days. I'm amazed at how your writing skills transformed from a somewhat understandable English construct to a now interesting immersive story! Another thing I liked in this is how you incorporate banger soundtracks to go with reading, it really does help in setting moods massively (Now I wonder why won't other authors do it also). This has been an amazing story so far wish you can update soon. Needing another Lucy POV.

    Ch 121 The Visit II
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    Cyberpunk: Arasaka Secret Son
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  • RENSHU
    RENSHU5mth
    Replied to The_man_The_myth
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