TheShadowMan
Young immortal
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You only used a single period in this whole paragraph and it wasn’t even at the end.
???
Lost***
4->5
‘Wow, sick! I can teleport!’
Seriously, you’re killin me here. Please edit some of this.
This is a mess. Why is mama capitalized on top of everything?
Dude you really need to break up these paragraphs
???
Magical magic? Maybe wizard magic?
what the rules are.***
Benders
What’s with the - ???
Hated the bank robbery but. Robbing a bank isn’t even smart. He was talking about blending in before this, getting a job and not using their powers for everything. He immediately f*ed it up. It just felt forced. Stan Lee encouraging him made it worse for me
??? Greyfia the ice user used fire against a lightning bolt???
???? Who’s he talkin too
Poliwhirl