hi! just wanna thank u for the review. my story is actually a mix of the horror game and the actual hide and seek game from japan(one man hide and seek) =)

Aw thanks, actually I know I need more improvement since I am an ******* writer. I hope you can write your own story, I really just wanted to share my ideas with others

Hi thanks for the review. It's actually the ending I wanted so it will be different than the usual happy ending

Hi thanks for the review. It's actually the ending I wanted so it will be different than the usual happy ending

Hi thanks for the review. It's actually the ending I wanted so it will be different than the usual happy ending

Hi thanks for the review. It's actually the ending I wanted so it will be different than the usual happy ending

Hi thanks for the review =)

Hi thanks for the review =)

Hi thanks for the review =)

Hi thanks for the review =)

Hi thanks for the review, I wanted to give a new kind of ending so this happened.

Hi thanks for the review. I wanted to give a different ending so I came with this end.

Hi thanks for the review. Im glad you liked it. So far this is my first original story cause the rest are anime fiction but look forward for my next work =)

Hi thanks for the review I really appreciate it, working on the grammar errors

Hi thanks for the review, Im glad you liked it

Hi thanks for the review I really appreciate it, working on the grammar errors

Hi thanks for the review

Hi thanks for the review =)

Hi thanks for the review I really appreciate it, working on the grammar errors

Hi thanks for the review I'm improving on the grammar, you're a first to say it's predictable in ending but thanks atleast you liked it