Master_of_Blood
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There is not aupposed to be any space between a word and a â?â, â!â, â,â. For example the first sentence goes â⌠1 day ?â, it should actually be â⌠1 day?â. The same thing is done later with exclamation marks and commas, and should also be fixed.
You are using the wrong pronouns a lot, it is him for males and her for females
Isnât it impossible to have a innate spirit power of over 10?