They have English names except for that one Ryuu guy and the odd Senpai/Ojou speech. I know it’s Japanese but if the rest of the story is English names it’s a bit jarring and kinda cringey.

What part of his face does the mask actually cover? The author said “half-mask” and that implies that the upper or the lower half of his face is covered. I was inclined to believe that his upper face was covered, because of the use of the phrase, “his eyes behind the mask”, but if he can raise an eyebrow (behind the mask) and still have it be seen I’m more inclined to believe he has the lower half covered. Having the lower half covered makes no sense though, because he’d have to take it off whenever he ate and since there’s been no scenes of people gasping at his beauty whenever he eats or people gasping at the upper part of his face, it makes more sense for it to be a half-mask that covers the upper half. So author, which is it? Upper mask or lower mask?

Do you know how far “a couple hundred meters” is? They would 100% not be able to hear the bandit laughing, unless the terrain echoed his voice to them, but blizzard weather does not permit echoes.

Wouldn’t it be better to place it in a hot environment because the “intruders” wouldn’t have gear appropriate for a cold dungeon? I can understand if he was placed in a cold environment in order to let him have better combat abilities OUTSIDE the dungeon, but since he’s the core it shouldn’t matter if he’s in a hot environment.

Jim Carey is spelled like this <- with an e not 2 r’s.

I feel sorry for Gu Xi.

Put this and the following paragraphs into the Author’s Notes.

Because it’s only music related and the author couldn’t think of anything besides that.

80% chance to be infected not 20%.

Awww, and I was starting to like the Stalker!

What a surprise, a final boss battle, between Ryan who has somehow survived the 80% chance to die and gained a tanking ability, and Zane. What a surprise, what a surprise. I usually suck at predicting endings but this one was just too predictable.

Lemme guess the 80% chance of death will “miraculously” spare Ryan and he will end up getting a power that makes his body nigh indestructible, leading to some type of “boss battle” before Zane’s group is able to leave the school grounds.

To the spoils went the victor. Wow, that is the first time I’ve heard that.

If you knew what a harem was, you would know that this is not one. Harem implies multiple lovers. Yes, there are a lot of females in the story but all but one only have a business relationship with Theo.

Red Moon or Star Month?

Tier 2 or Tier 4? All previous encounters with the Stalker described it as a Tier 4.

No weeds.

That’s gotta make a helluva lotta noise.

That’s great and all, but how does this tie into the main story? I know Aurora is an integral part of the story, but there have been more than 5 chapters dedicated to purely the stuff that’s happened at her school, I know it’s great to have side stories but a chapter or two for the election and a chapter or two after should be all you need, we don’t need an excessive 5, 6, 7, chapters on her school life. The story is about Theo, not Aurora, and he’s not even in school, so there’s no need for an academy arc. I’m sorry I just fail to see how it all ties in. Yes, she can have a side story, but I want to hear about Moonlight and his restaurant and Ayia and his other stuff, not about Aurora in school and her festival. Good novel besides that though.