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(THIS BOOK IS ONLY 1 OF 3!) This novel is very good, but it has 1 very strong negative point! The protegonist's relationship with all the characters in the story is not deep. The protagonist says he wants to return to our world, but all the experiences he had with the people of this world are much more remarkable than any he had in ours, and even then, the author does not develop a sincere friendship between him and other characters. . Virtually all of your interactions with others are based on cooperation. Sometimes I felt he was just a spectator being carried away by fate precisely because there was a lack of a stronger bond between him and the world he was in. At the beginning, the author justifies the lack of deepening of the protagonist's relationship with others as a way for him not to 'get attached', but if our world is so important to him, how in 1430 chapters did he mention it only once? How has the protagonist never thought about his life here? (For me, the author failed miserably at this point!) However, even with this strong negative point the story is still excellent and worth reading... That's until I get to the last page! What disappointed me the most in all of this, was getting to the last chapter and finding out that this story is a trilogy and this is just book 1, I felt cheated and offended, there was no such information anywhere, after reading 1430 pages, I get... Go back in 2023, are there still two parts left? I SINCERELY WANT TO THANK THE AUTHOR'S MOTHER AND THE RESPONSIBLE FOR THE INFORMATION ON THIS SITE, WHO HAVE NOT LEFT THIS 'IRRELEVANT' INFORMATION ANYWHERE!
Transmigrated from the 21st century, and develops a gaudy uniform.
I will try to summarize what made me abandon this novel. First: In this novel, all the characters up to the chapter I read, cap 80 were either evil or perverted. It is impossible for a society to be completely like that, the novel tries to sell the story of being different from the clichés, but the only thing it did was to misrepresent all the characters and it continued cliché. Second: The protagonist is distorted. The author tries to sell him as a bored old fighter at first, but soon after shows that the guy had already killed several common people in our world. In the new world he gets even more bizarre, to the point of killing a beaten guy while 'enjoying' the feeling of doing so. And the most important point, basically everything in this novel is guided to slavery, the protagonist wants to enslave everybody. Honestly, the novel is bad, the development is weak, the R18 scenes are poorly developed, in short, this novel is not worth reading.
Are you going to fuck him unconscious too? --- Everything in this novel is based on enslaving others, the author has serious problems.
What I hate most about system romance is the god ex machina. It is possible to make a good novel with the system without using the system to solve every problem that comes up!
god ex machina in 11 chapters? We started off well.
He commented on the levels as something important and difficult to reach, but the protagonist is advancing as if he were drinking water. That doesn't make any sense, and if going forward is that easy, it doesn't make sense that the 4 he hit are so weak!
Author, you must make up your mind! It was said that he was the master of the sect and that he was the only expert in the realm of the nascent soul. --- Are you a great old man now? What will next time be? Disciple of the outer disciple in the realm of the nascent soul, lol.
I really liked the way this novel portrayed human interactions. It is not always that the protagonist will get what he wants, or win over a certain woman. The world of cultivation is well structured and the plot continues without holes. However, I did not like the way his relationship with the women in the harem had little prominence. The finish was good, but it is far from excellent. As it is a finished book, in which it has a basis of what to expect from history, I would recommend this book to those looking for a grade 4 novel, with good adventure, reasonably realistic human relations and a good plot.