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RedPoneglyph

RedPoneglyph

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I'm in love with novels, I especially love adventure and romance.

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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph1yr
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    (THIS BOOK IS ONLY 1 OF 3!) This novel is very good, but it has 1 very strong negative point! The protegonist's relationship with all the characters in the story is not deep. The protagonist says he wants to return to our world, but all the experiences he had with the people of this world are much more remarkable than any he had in ours, and even then, the author does not develop a sincere friendship between him and other characters. . Virtually all of your interactions with others are based on cooperation. Sometimes I felt he was just a spectator being carried away by fate precisely because there was a lack of a stronger bond between him and the world he was in. At the beginning, the author justifies the lack of deepening of the protagonist's relationship with others as a way for him not to 'get attached', but if our world is so important to him, how in 1430 chapters did he mention it only once? How has the protagonist never thought about his life here? (For me, the author failed miserably at this point!) However, even with this strong negative point the story is still excellent and worth reading... That's until I get to the last page! What disappointed me the most in all of this, was getting to the last chapter and finding out that this story is a trilogy and this is just book 1, I felt cheated and offended, there was no such information anywhere, after reading 1430 pages, I get... Go back in 2023, are there still two parts left? I SINCERELY WANT TO THANK THE AUTHOR'S MOTHER AND THE RESPONSIBLE FOR THE INFORMATION ON THIS SITE, WHO HAVE NOT LEFT THIS 'IRRELEVANT' INFORMATION ANYWHERE!

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    Lord of Mysteries
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

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    altalt
    Pocket Hunting Dimension
    Eastern · Blue Sky Washing Rain
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    Transmigrated from the 21st century, and develops a gaudy uniform.

    The Landschnekt uniforms were all dyed in the colors of his house, which were black, and white, and gold. The NCOs and Officers were currently garbed in blackened steel munitions grade half-plate armor, with matching burgonets and gorgets. Each piece had an intricate brass pattern engraved across the armor.
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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Posted

    I will try to summarize what made me abandon this novel. First: In this novel, all the characters up to the chapter I read, cap 80 were either evil or perverted. It is impossible for a society to be completely like that, the novel tries to sell the story of being different from the clichés, but the only thing it did was to misrepresent all the characters and it continued cliché. Second: The protagonist is distorted. The author tries to sell him as a bored old fighter at first, but soon after shows that the guy had already killed several common people in our world. In the new world he gets even more bizarre, to the point of killing a beaten guy while 'enjoying' the feeling of doing so. And the most important point, basically everything in this novel is guided to slavery, the protagonist wants to enslave everybody. Honestly, the novel is bad, the development is weak, the R18 scenes are poorly developed, in short, this novel is not worth reading.

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    Villain Cultivator
    Eastern · DamnPlotArmor
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    Are you going to fuck him unconscious too? --- Everything in this novel is based on enslaving others, the author has serious problems.

    The plan for spreading his network worked well. Xu Miao obtained one more potential ally to be used against Xu Xiuying and Xie Tian. However, to get Jia Shan to do his bidding, he required a firmer relationship.
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    Villain Cultivator
    Eastern · DamnPlotArmor
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    What I hate most about system romance is the god ex machina. It is possible to make a good novel with the system without using the system to solve every problem that comes up!

    <<Current service – Two Minutes of Super Perception Boost: 1,000 Yang Qi.>>
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    Villain Cultivator
    Eastern · DamnPlotArmor
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    This makes no sense! They were monitoring everything around their room, how did she get to his room?! This is a grotesque mistake!

    Ch 67 A night of massacre Final
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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    god ex machina in 11 chapters? We started off well.

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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    He commented on the levels as something important and difficult to reach, but the protagonist is advancing as if he were drinking water. That doesn't make any sense, and if going forward is that easy, it doesn't make sense that the 4 he hit are so weak!

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    Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
    Fantasy · SHIVAM_Chouksey
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Posted

    Creative! He worked the world and the central idea in an impressive way, providing us with epic and funny moments. I RECOMMEND IT TO EVERYONE WHO WILL WANT A FUN AND DIFFERENT CLICHES EXPERIENCE!

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    Black Tech Internet Cafe System
    Eastern · The Leaf That Goes Against Water
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph2yr
    Commented

    Author, you must make up your mind! It was said that he was the master of the sect and that he was the only expert in the realm of the nascent soul. --- Are you a great old man now? What will next time be? Disciple of the outer disciple in the realm of the nascent soul, lol.

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    Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
    Eastern · PurpleSpring
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  • RedPoneglyph
    RedPoneglyph3yr
    Posted

    I really liked the way this novel portrayed human interactions. It is not always that the protagonist will get what he wants, or win over a certain woman. The world of cultivation is well structured and the plot continues without holes. However, I did not like the way his relationship with the women in the harem had little prominence. The finish was good, but it is far from excellent. As it is a finished book, in which it has a basis of what to expect from history, I would recommend this book to those looking for a grade 4 novel, with good adventure, reasonably realistic human relations and a good plot.

    altalt
    Castle of Black Iron
    Fantasy · Drunk Tiger
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