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He believes he is just inhabiting Lucas body in the beginning only recent chapters has he started questioning if he and Lucas are the same.
Man, this god just killed him 3 times. I know Lucas is going to be mad right now. And I smell a lot of false hood in that gods rants bet he just riled him up so he would stop looking for his memories. I smell a conspiracy.
when he went through Lucas journals trying to find his memories.
Looking forward to the I am your brother reveal.
She is prolly going to also enjoy the moment Helga finds out about her familial ties heh.
The I'm your brother reveal is going to be a beautiful site to behold when it comes up.
If I had to say anything about this scene and the ascendance of a bookworm it's that in the bookworms case it was more impactful because it was both a little Child (on the outside mind you) who and a little girl at that let's face it when you read about a lil girl crying her heart out it will definitely insight some psychological feelings of protectiveness. Now in zero case though it does hit some feels with the sister crying a lil if she was a bit more emotional in my opinion anyway that may give you a more desired effect not to mention instead of a child who's virtually the size of a toddler we have a 15 year old(again on the outside perception) which in most fantasy constitutes he is a adult which does not hit the feels as much as a small child. Not to mention bookworm literally broke down a bit so that hurt alot but zero is more resolved about it and has been in control of his emotions pretty well at least In this chapter I will read the next soon but because he is more composed it takes away from the impact you were looking for. all in all I don't mine the reveal and look forward to what happens next.