workdaddy

i think this is very good for a start i hope we get a lot more in this story .............................................................................................................................................

wish there was more great story 11111111122222222222223333333333334444444444455555555555555566666666666777777777777777888888888888888888888888

sweet and sour

ch 20 is a repeat of ch 19 other than that this is seriously a great novel i was glued reading this novel keep up the great work hope to read more

spear is not a gun or rifle

translation is horrible spear and guns are not the same