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jyjya year agoPostedthe story is correct but I'm fed up with the main character in the Naruto universe who doesn't take any risks and when they do an action it's often stupid (prepared means of hiding clones among the uchiha, not to save their friends but to steal , a corpse which is of no use to him) at least not like ff who make a character who does not want to have known her is capable and who kills everyone for me this ff loses all interest after ch192 the main character does not want to act even with clones so I stop there
- jyjy2 years agoPosted
nothing special, a clichéd main character from a bad naruto story, stupid trying to say that they are intelligent, and incorreace from one chapter to another, especially on the character, he says careful what he does? He bumps into a classmate, why because he followed her (reason he could have said that the MCs are strong, a chapter before he was close to rising this force).
- jyjy3 years agoCommented
121 -> 131 ? _ ?
- jyjy4 years agoCommented
Thanks for the chapter
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