Great pacing! would have loved battle details...

Warning: Novel is incomplete at 251 chapters. good character development and story, later chapters emphasised too much on social media and web society commentary, which is this novels version of fillers, at times entertaining but becomes a bit annoying as it drags and dilutes the story.

okay it's a bit of a rant so sorry, a fan of the work btw.. just suggestions and personal thoughts... story concept and flow wise is great, a bit verbose in areas while in some just blasting through, I suggest spacing out your details so that it has a better rhythm, cause honestly, it feels like Im reading in the pacing of sandstorm by darude... conceptually it is great but I feel like the character is taking way too much in at one time on the fly... not much thought process to develop character understanding... I would have loved some insights about current events of why character wants to introduce certain products and techs, not just because he can, since it makes a void in the characters drive to do things... anyway long rant couldn't stop reading till this chap so yeah... can't wait for the next chap... also - military cant [or] camp? saw it a couple of times In about 2 more instances...

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Great story! as of writing this only 20 chapters are posted. [img=update] and not sure about posting frequency. there are spelling errors, some grammar issues but doesn't hinder readability.