SetteXIII

No kidding this fic look just like a giant summary of events with some sparse dialogues and actions.

This history had too much descriptions, its like its a huge summary, you should tell more instead of just summarizing.

Did you read up to this point and still believe that the author had any real knowledge of the original works? Its all over the place, personalities, power scaling and even the lore.

That makes no sense, she is a monarch level cultivator, they didn't even need to eat.

Thanks for the chapter!

Nah, Gasper can also stop time and that just doesn't work on the big wings.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!