a lot of filling friend, I hope you don't start adding too much filling like the rest

I think you don't understand anything about One Piece, pirates are 1 million times worse than the world government.

Most ninjas are stupid, blast tags are 10 times better than a fireball jutsu.

Friend, who is the protagonist in this series? getting more and more boring no one cares about madara or obito,+50 filler chapters

hahaha now you realize it friend? The Vikings were even worse than you imagine, that's why people who think that people lived better before always amuses me.

It is ,the author it is not a writer, it is a translator

one of the best comments on this page

the protagonist is super broken, it doesn't make sense to give him more powers,fujitore he easily defeats everyone in naruto, he could even destroy the "moon"

The amount of padding this fanfic has I have never seen in any other, when you introduced Karina you destroyed the series completely

too much padding i feel like nothing progresses

Do people seriously doubt Hiruzen? he was the strongest hokage in his time, we are talking about a person without kekkei genkai if that is not being a prodigy I don't know what it is, who controls the 5 elements they forget about the fight against white zetsu controlling yamato's body, even orochimaru I was afraid of him, we are talking about a person who is almost 70 years old, he sealed Orochimaru's hand

I'm sorry but being a veteran in any war suggests that you sure killed people, and even innocent ones

But what can an ant do? Give me an example, they don't serve as spies because nobody has ants, and ants are not everywhere. Can you talk to all the ants in the world, can you control them like a hive mind,I still quite like your novel, I just didn't understand why they gave it importance, they didn't even consider that power useless

The power to talk to ants is the stupidest power I've ever seen, it's 100 times better to be able to talk to pigeons, the worst thing is that ants can't even talk, and it's also useless, what information can an ant

It was inevitable, the authors love to give superpowers to the ridiculous protagonists, it doesn't even have 30 chapters and it already transforms into a human, something totally nonsense,to that add patreon to a series that I do not publish even 30 chapters, and it is not even the original author since bleach has an owner

kkk macaco

it is a random island in one piece there must be thousands of islands like that, even tens of thousands of islands

I honestly don't know how they are not ashamed, first, a stolen novel, second, they sell something that is not yours on patreon, even on patreon there are the chapters that the original author wrote, the changes are almost nil

It started well and ended like 99% of the stories on this page, the protagonist was in the army, and it gives him super power op, it would have been 10 times better if he focused only on the economic issue

Always the same again, why do they give him so many powers? Power in the world of Naruto doesn't make sense, what matters is economic power