Davis111

Chu Han killing zombies like...

Is this book ever going to get picked back up? This is my favorite apocalypse novel on WN and it's sad to see it sitting here at just under 300 chapters for so long...

wasting my stones on this?

He's a Chinese novel MC = old businessman who only worries about getting more out of it than he puts in. Won't save a kid from a burning house but will save a kid from a burning mansion.

....nonsense, how can you get a 'thank you' without saving someone else.

Average to decent. A good time waster. The overall plot is good, the story is good, the world background is good. There is not a lot of info dumps, but when they occur it is short. This novel suffers tremendously from typical CH peanut gallery commentary. Expect anywhere from 1/4 to 1/2 of a chapter with action to be made up of "noise" from the peanut gallery. If the author cut this down to a few lines and filled the rest of their word count with character development between the MC and him companions it would drastically increase the value of the novel. Now the MC is not very well fleshed out, the author has "alluded" to him having thoughts and a personality. However without his unspoken thoughts, the mc at ch 70 is just a mindless guy rushing to get all the benefits his future knowledge will allow. At this point this is just a moderately more interesting novel on this site. Hopefully the author can "breathe life" into the character interaction and the personality of the MC so the novel will not flop.

...no you don't.

This needs a professional editor. The author will write a sentence where the 2nd half of the sentence totally contradicts the first. Many times I had to imitate Sherlock Holmes just to understand what the author was trying to get across.The reincarnation of the MC is filler, we get one sentence that alludes to it in the first ten chapters. There are a lot of abrupt scene changes and numerous times the author could have expounded on things that were interesting, but didn't. The premise and the character's thoughts/personality are especially appealing to me, pity that there is so much wrong with the novel.

Author needs a professional team of editors. This could have been a good novel...

...just say it, or compare the process...