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The president or any normal human doesn't say that. They will say: Some refreshments, please. Something sweet."
One issue: why are the humans talkong like cybertronians. They're talking like they're robots, not humans.
Author forgot that All for One has a a stealing quirk that can steal other quirks...
Multiple grammatical errors, a lot of misplaced/misused punctuation marks. Also, it some parts, you jumpskip into another event/timeline for no reason. In some cases, it's hard to know which character is talking. You need an editor and proofreader.
Or chimera? What's the 'or' for?
The characters way of speaking is getting worse and worse by the chapter. Almost all of them are talking like scientists or bots.
Update to my last review. Now every character is talking like an AI after chapter 244. I'll stop reading this until author fixes his ai translation or whatever.
Variables. Normal conversations uses circumstances instead of variables. Variables are used by scientists, mathematicians, AI etc.
Mike is more and more becoming a rpbot with the way he speaks. No normal person would use hypothesis in a normal conversation.