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Mokaje1mthCommentedThe author trying to force the idea that this isn’t earth so much is honestly starting to get extremely annoying, which is why it’s probably earth but in the future
This world is so much different than Earth since none of this was possible there. If it was, it had never been Ashton's turn to knew about this so he still preferred this.- Mokaje1mthCommented
for the new readers out there, whenever a writer mentions a detail like this, know that this will be an event that's going to happen in the future, which is also known as "foreshadowing". have fun and don't forget, novels are a part of your daily routine, it should not consume all your time.
This was an ordinary bar in Moon Lane, which was as famous as Liuying Street. As for Moon Lane, it was filled with bars, casinos, and even places to buy and sell slaves. - Mokaje6mthCommented
Ah, the comedic relief character makes its appearance.
"Here let me help you," the acolyte said, offering a hand to help Emery up his feet. "Are you a first year like me? Call me Fatty. What about you? What's your name?" - Mokaje6mthReplied to idfask
Interesting theory, I hope that you’re correct, another way of viewing spirit aptitude is that its the general synchronicity between the person and the energy type in this novel, this way the B in spirit aptitude could be considered as 80% in sync with the energy for example. I hope your theory is the correct one though.
Now that he thought about it, it made sense. Also, Emery studying the plant element might really be the way for him to go. After all, back home, he had always loved being around nature and exploring its nooks and crannies and strange plants and animals. Inside him, he couldn't help but blame his own stupidity for not realizing this sooner. - Mokaje6mthCommented
the last sentence could have been written much more concisely and it would have been less jarring. You can adress the lake by “it” or by implication, it doesnt have to be explicitly written every time. Have a good one
They went toward the center of the island along with a group of youths and the next sight was equally surprising. There was a very large lake surrounded by tall trees on the edge of the lake and a long platform heading toward the giant statue standing in the middle of the lake. - Mokaje7mthCommented
Thats what a fountain pen looks like for anyone who isn’t familiar with it
Aurore sat at her desk, scribbling away with a champagne fountain pen, dressed in a sky-blue gown. - Mokaje7mthCommented
She’s 20 years old! What kind of experience are you talking about?!
Valerie on the other hand seemed used to such reception. She had become an expert at controlling such situations since she had been a teacher for some time now. There were some tricks that one learnt only with experience. - Mokaje7mthReplied to cruelsanto
Same😕
Zavier kept his head down and moved towards the back of the hall. His designated seat was towards the rear of the first column. Sitting in the corner might have helped the previous owner hide his insignificant presence somewhat. But Zavier did not need to do that at all, he just wanted to keep a low profile to not reveal as much of his strength. - Mokaje10mthReplied to Morning_Star666
Yeah I'm thinking the same thing, he's probably the "question marks" guy
***Back to before game Launch, POV David Magnus*** - Mokaje11mthCommentedNoticing the time, she bode him farewell, entering a lift that proceeded to the Lower Strata. Hancent stood in silence, like a statue frozen in time, moving only after an hour had passed. His wife was gone, just like that. It would be a long time before they could meet once again.
- Mokaje1yrCommented
Dave is an undead draugr, true, but he's not that bad
This paragraph has been deleted. - Mokaje1yrReplied to RelHD
Some people don’t even put in the work
Just power, nothing else. - Mokaje1yrReplied to Ganymedes
Height only matters, when you feel it matters
'I'm smaller, my unnecessary fat is gone, but my muscles are also gone,' Alex thought. 'This is either the body of someone that only does cardio, or I'm in the body of a teenager. I don't think that this God would send me into a grown body that's only 160 centimeters tall. After all, he wants me to become powerful, and height is an insane advantage in physical combat.' - Mokaje1yrCommented"This is not a cute little cucumber! This… This is a mighty cucumber!"
- Mokaje1yrReplied to GolDenShaD0w
No they’re characters in Destiny the video game
It looked like some sort of shadow monster with bright crimson eyes. It was menacing and it kept roaring at the two of them, trying to scare them away. Then the perspective zoomed-in at the man's huge sword which glower with a white light while the woman started floating in the air. - Mokaje1yrReplied to Tekbox
No worries, yeah thats a weird thing to imaagine so i don’t blame you on that one lol
Since prices were based on the storage space dimension, with only 2,000 U remaining, I could only afford 25 cubic meters worth of space. - Mokaje1yrReplied to TheShadowedHorizonAurora stopped walking while Zah walked forward, but he had to stop because Aurora stopped. When he looked back, he snorted after seeing Aurora's flushed face. She immediately pulled her hands back and hid her face behind her hands.
- Mokaje1yrCommented
No one: The Spider: I WANT A FAIR TRADE!
"Xie Lua, I want to propose a fair trade," Zach uttered with a serious look on his face. - Mokaje1yrCommentedThis time, the three of them went in Rolls Royce, the Phantom Tempus. Arkhen was driving and Evelyn was sitting in the passenger seat while Zoe was sitting behind with a small pout. She lost rock, paper, scissor against Evelyn so she had to sit behind.