all these chapters have been great, but honestly phlorias death seems kinda stupid. liths super paranoid i think he should notice things are a bit wierd and why would he go for her vital organs and not like, the stomach if all he had to do was hold war in her

pretty ok, only read to 98. the english is a bit rough but not drop worthy. the characters have some decent moments but are pretty flat it might get better as there is like 1200 chapters. a bit sad that i cant seem to use coins on individial chapters. im not gonna spend 150-250 dollars to buy this whole book in one go. i dont spend that on hard copies of big name authors.

legion is just killin it, if he ever gets this published in physical form id absolutely buy that shit. charecters and there growth is amazing, thats my favorite part of books and its spot on.