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Jojouk

Jojouk

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I love reading books and time to time I try to write 🤔

2017-12-25 JoinedTurkey
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  • Jojouk
    Jojouk14d ago
    Posted

    Why is the main character still in touch with his family and why does he care about them? They treated him so badly, always looked down on him, and ruined his mental health. I'm really curious about the reason; did I miss something in the story?

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk14d ago
    Posted

    I think it's a really successful novel. The main character’s behavior and mental state are beautifully portrayed, and the premise is genuinely intriguing. The plot progression, the depiction of female characters, and the dialogue are all well-executed. I especially appreciate that the pacing isn't rushed and the group members didn't instantly bond with the protagonist, which adds to the realism. My only critique is that certain sections drag on unnecessarily; like chapter 94 to 104 are entirely dedicated to the gear descriptions. This doesn’t contribute much to the story and could have been handled much faster. I’d highly appreciate it if anyone could recommend similar novels!

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk3 years ago
    Commented

    Why is he blushing from a simple gesture?

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk3 years ago
    Posted

    Can someone tell me are there any time skips? like how old is he in the latest chapter?

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk4 years ago
    Posted

    This must be dumbest book I have ever read, all the plots and characters are really is just bad writing. Save yourself and never try this.

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk4 years ago
    Commented

    not my type of thing. It's not a harem where he's not the priority but his wife is. It's like she decides which women they would have s*x and it's up to her priorities, or maybe it's just I don't like his wife's a bi and to me she's more into the girl.

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk4 years ago
    Posted

    This is one of my new favourite book, It has everything I want from a cultivation book and I really recommend everyone to read this, at least go for 20 or more chapters and see if this is for you. spoiler Can anyone tell me in the future chapters there will br no fight or jelousy going on between cain and kali right?

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk5 years ago
    Posted

    Let's hope that author can increase his pace because story's really good and it's pretty boring to wait :(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(::(:(:(::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((::(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:((:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(:(

  • Jojouk
    Jojouk5 years ago
    Commented

    Oh well, really hyped for this book :(:(:(

    This chapter has been deleted.
  • Jojouk
    Jojouk5 years ago
    Replied to Oto

    I just saw your replay and I can surely say that ML is stronger in comparison and there is no problem in marriage, it happily happens because of ML. When I said this book is great I read then speak my opinion, you just based on 2 points and deemed this book is cliche? cmon man, do better.