Dark_rose
I read, write and draw whenever I feel like it. I'm from Guyana ( that's in South American )
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Dark_rose1mthCommentedCan someone! ANYONE? Please! PLEASE! PLEASE! For. The. Love. Of. GOD! Tell me WHEN the flashback ENDS!
Aberdeen Hotel, Two years ago- Dark_rose5mthCommented
But * he* felt a soft hand.....
But she felt a soft hand touch his arms, making him freeze. - Dark_rose7mthCommentedCh 1 Snow Girl
- Dark_rose1yrReplied to Pikune
It also a light novel, it really good 👍
It was a harmless, doe eyed, pretty girl. - Dark_rose1yrReplied to Dark_rose
It says " Theo shook her head." shouldn't it be "his".
"But you will become more annoying later, thinking I will do anything for you." Theo shook her head. "Besides, I don't care that much. The moment you step here, you are not a female or male anymore. You are a fighter. If I need to kill, I will kill even if it's you." - Dark_rose1yrCommented
I've noticed an inconsistencies with his pronounce, where it should be "he" but there a "she".
"But you will become more annoying later, thinking I will do anything for you." Theo shook her head. "Besides, I don't care that much. The moment you step here, you are not a female or male anymore. You are a fighter. If I need to kill, I will kill even if it's you." - Dark_rose1yrReplied to ImmortalVirgin_0980
Listen to some good music, vibe to it and you wouldn't notice the mistakes that much. Soon you'll reword the sentences; grammar and all, so that it makes sense to you and inner peace will come to you my friend.✌
As expected, Laust was waiting for him in the classroom to make sure that he didn't run away. - Dark_rose1yrCommented
I hope the party exp share is turned off.
[EXP+1735] - Dark_rose1yrCommented
ships*
"I guess I'll be here again after one month, with three sloops full of saltpeter," the businesswoman said as she hastily took notes on a parchment, "Calculated by 90% of the market price, it is worth about 315 gold royals." - Dark_rose1yrReplied to Spacewarrior17
I wouldn't say that Roland is their "Holy Mountain". It's more likely ,in my opinion, that their "Holy Mountain" is a place where they can freely be themselves and Roland provides that... He is like a big tree with lots of shade.
"Take it easy! His Highness will be happier if he knows." Nightingale assured her. - Dark_rose1yrCommented
that made her feel the intense heat of the fire, produced by Anna was painful.... maybe....something along those lines might work better.
Nightingale retreated quickly to dodge the heat wave that made her painful. - Dark_rose1yrCommented
*his daughter's hand. minor grammar mistake. good story. just in case you wish to write a physical copy. 😉
"Grasp my hands when it hurts." Tigui shook her daughter's left hand and said, "You've grown much stronger at the hospital. I'm so proud of you." - Dark_rose2yrReplied to halloween20
I've almost finished 3/4 of my soju. Two bottles of sparkling wine. One more!
'Jeez… it seems that Grandpa Kuys' circle of friends is wider than I thought!' - Dark_rose2yrCommented
at the same time*
At the same tone, he checked the crystal energy consumption to sustain the barrier and saw that he could still support the machine for another day. - Dark_rose2yrCommented
Exp~~~
Zhang Wei violently slammed the tabled and screamed, "Damn it! It took Han Xiao so much effort to obtain the critical intelligence, but now this lot are going to leave us in the lurch!" - Dark_rose2yrCommented
big brother attitude 😤
Afterwards, with eyes still half-closed, Han Xiao went over to the kitchen in the main workshop where he pushed Lu Qian off her seat at the dining table with his butt and helped himself to the remainder of her breakfast, all the while ignoring her feeble protests. - Dark_rose2yrCommented
So what you mean is yall got nothing on me
As the investigator sealed the compiled information in an envelope, he coldly told Han Xiao, "The internal affairs department is always watching you. Pray we don't find anything on you." - Dark_rose2yrCommented
Then stop acting like a fool. Asked a stupid question, get a stupid answer.
"Stop playing a fool!" - Dark_rose2yrCommented
@ssh○le.......
That's why he left Ainsley, someone he 'created' for the sake of leaving an heir to the family. - Dark_rose2yrCommented
☆ Spoiled Rich Kids Vibes ☆~~~~
'Ooohhh?! Only escorting mission? This should be not that hard!' Tang Li Xue's eyes turned brighter after she saw her mission.