R33C3
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R33C31yrReplied to Nith_HaiahUnless he added the restrictions after hela had already used it
as we reached there I spread my magic senses to scan it and found out that there were runes in it that prevented any one to access it, but when we were just in front of it the runes in it changed to make it have a connection with Thor. I looked in Odin direction from the corner of my eyes and saw him doing the same and I could see a warning sign in it,so looks like he perceived me scanning moljnir, oops not that it matters as I know that this weapon suits Thor more than any other weapon.- R33C31yrReplied to monstercat1
Probably from a subconscious need to have the plot going the way it should which also includes penny ending with Leonard. The only things that he’a changed are the things about himself which overrall doesn’t affect the plot all too much apart from the fact he may not end up with Amy
He laughed, "No, we are close but I see her as more of a sister, but at the same time we couldn't match well. She is to messy of a person for me." - R33C31yrReplied to DarkApolonir
I can’t be too sure but I believe the explanation for the mind shield was more for mental intrusion to his psyche and even if not it’s not impossible for him to have gained control over his mind shield to allow telepathic communication
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The chapter was done good, the analysis portion could have maybe had more back and forth conversation for character building of characters but other than that really small detail the chapter was brilliant.
(An: all right! This was more of a test chapter I tried to write a mix of things, I described the fights of other briefly for the sake of continuity, and put some fight analysis as well, it was hard as the fights did not have much to comment about, and finally put the fight of Kirishima as well to show how the mc influenced his mentality. Give me your thoughts on this chapter, it was a bit different to write but I'm down for trying new things. - R33C31yrCommented
I’d say to be brief with others characters fights other than the MC and possibly kirishima since his training with the MC could have an effect on the result of the fights if you are just using the same bracket as canon
Folks I'm in the middle of the brain storm for the creatiom of the next chapter, you know searching the bracket, the order of fights, and stuff like that. I'm curious about how you guys want the third round to be, description of fights of people other than the mc, or just the mc fights and brief mentioning of the fights of the other people. - R33C31yrReplied to TheSystemFanCh 13 ISSUE #13
- R33C31yrReplied to MagicSand
With the context surrounding it I’m assuming it means ”game”
"This Nima is a bit scary..." - R33C31yrCommented
Batmans wet dream lol
In addition to this, he also received a utility belt which can shrink items he placed in it. They have limited spaces, a little bit durable but still needs to ne taken care off since if it got destroyed, all the items stored inside will be destroyed as well. - R33C31yrReplied to Soda_T
Yeah it was mentioned in an earlier chapter that due to experiencing so much abuse his body was adapting to both take more damage and heal said damage faster
And stopping to allow his minor healing factor to work more and increase his strength slightly. It was gruelling, but he was tough. - R33C31yrCommented
Nah stuff was allowed as long as you applied for it and it was a reasonable thing to need like aoyamas belt, I don’t see why they wouldn’t let him have his kunai as his quirk is reliant on throwables to be used properly
[AN: For those of you that said he shouldn't have his equipment… Y'all are absolutely right. I totally forgot that 'no costumes' also extends to 'no weapons'. That was my bad :). Nothing I could do to change it now though. Soo, enjoy the chapter.] - R33C31yrCommented
He can train his ability to condense his flames to change their colour and work his way to white flames. Could also create black flames that work like Amaterasu in naruto that don’t stop burning unless he wills it
I need fire ability's suggestions, I've already planned to copy a few characters, such as Ace and Shinra, but I wanna see what you guys suggest (They can be characters or just specific spells). Comment them pls, on para or normal comment - R33C31yrCommented
Tbh it was hella creepy making him stalk Midoriya like that, there was no reason behind why he would do it after all for all he knew it could have an AU where midoriya has a quirk/died/ doesn’t exist
A/N: What did you think of this introduction to the canon? The only thing that complicates me is the dialogues, that's why there are so few and some will be almost the same as the anime / manga so I'll try to make them seem less robotic, so as always if you see any bad grammar or spelling let me know, some I can fix them , others not, thanks for all your support, let's make this fanfic go further. - R33C31yrCommented
Don’t do harem, it wouldn’t fit the character and more often than not a harem being added just ruins the story development
This paragraph has been deleted. - R33C31yrReplied to hidden_gate
Author might just not be able to describe him going below the level of a whisper without actually writing something like “muttering below the level of a whisper” so it could just be a matter of not wanting to have to repeat the same description everytime he has to speak to attack
The attack sent the android crashing against the floor with devastating force, leaving me to continue on the flight his earlier punch had sent me. - R33C31yrReplied to Sovannra_Seang
Might be a Chinese translation he’s copying from and he forgot to edit the name to natsu from Xia Yan to Natsu
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Nami would notice the difference lol
To replace the treasure, I carried a bag containing gold-colored stones. I used normal paint for that, but as long as there is some real gold on top of them, nobody will distinguish them at least with a look. - R33C31yrCommented
Dumbledore would be proud
But that also shows his trust in me. I planned to manipulate him a bit, but not harm him at all. I would rather give him a better place to stay than the marines and if a small bit of manipulation helps then why not? - R33C31yrReplied to Gin_toki_v2
Maybe he was just toying with them? author never exactly went into detail beyond that he swung the sword for 10 minutes
He continuously swung the katana for 10 minutes before he was only left with two genin. - R33C31yrReplied to WalterHeisenberg
It is canon that everyone is born with chakra and a relating affinity/affinities, ninjas and samurai are just the people that have unlocked it either by themselves or with help from teachers. If I’m wrong let me know in a reply.
A second later thirty shadow soldiers started to come out from the shadow of the dead, they were all different from each other. They had the normal black color, but instead of just being blue or purple for every soldier, they had different highlight colors. I didn't understand what they meant at first but after seeing the colors and relating it to the elements present in this world, it clicked in my mind. Those colors indicated which element was they are most suitable with.