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Why do I get the feeling that this doctor is lying and telling him to stop daydreaming and go to sleep?
Not regressing, but going back to the origin... Or mc maybe its just trash.
I think they mean to say that the dragon skin its hot, but the mc as the owner of the dragon its not afected by its temperature.
***Shameless review and rating of the author*** I really don know how to write good reviews so I will only tell you what I plan to archive in this novel. In general, I want to make a quick-paced and funny novel so I hope we can all enjoy it and participate in it. In a more specific way, as the synopsis says, the novel will focus more on the world of Kazakh (that's the name of Deimos world) and the players doing their own things while playing what they think is a revolutionary VRMMO and affecting this world in their own way. For the power system and more, I plan to use a system similar to the ones on RP games like D&D with some modifications (mostly simplifying the magic to some similar to spells base on physics and magic power as a resource) so if you want to get an idea about the strength of the enemies that will appear you can always check the monster manual. If you spot any misspelling or grammar errors or simply you have a suggestion, don't doubt to comment about them, since I am my own translator and editor, most probably I miss some words. Thank you and good reading.
The camp where they are at the moment
I will try a new method, for the moment here is the main continent, and the story ist developing on the Twilight Empire.
So the sellers smell great?
And the new clan, the furball clan made by the Mc
But considering his life and death experiencias in battle as a rank 3 he may be able to beat some rank 8
Boss Peí you're very evil, to think that you will force Bao brother to éxit his sanctuary and to be exposed to the exterior yet again.
I want to make the appearance that he is not hurt but, he really is, remember, at the moment he thinks he is lost, that he will never see them again and don't want to hurt or make his friend uncomfortable as it will be the last time they see each other. And about the "girl", it was "little girl" (She's not), Aaron sees Melody as immature (He was trained to be a lord from young age so he is a little more mature that your regular kit) so that's why, but after translating it, it changes to a girl that is a lot older than what I was pretending to transmit.