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2017-12-19 JoinedMexico
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  • raferras
    raferras2yr
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    Why do I get the feeling that this doctor is lying and telling him to stop daydreaming and go to sleep?

    "But we found that you only need to sleep to distinguish the illusions from reality.
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    Starting From Fooling the Elderly into Registering for a Cultivation Training Class
    Eastern · Evolution of Ten Updating Beasts
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    raferras2yr
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    Not regressing, but going back to the origin... Or mc maybe its just trash.

    There was even a faint feeling that he was regressing.
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    Xianxia: My Junior Sisters Are Freaks!
    Eastern · You You Jiang Jiang!
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    I think they mean to say that the dragon skin its hot, but the mc as the owner of the dragon its not afected by its temperature.

    The temperature of the little fire dragon was very high. When Joelson held it, it felt like he was holding a stove. Even his tongue was hot. However, as the owner of the little fire dragon, Joelson did not feel hot.
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    Fantasy · Fish For Every Year
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    Blood Heroes
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  • raferras
    raferras3yr
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    ***Shameless review and rating of the author*** I really don know how to write good reviews so I will only tell you what I plan to archive in this novel. In general, I want to make a quick-paced and funny novel so I hope we can all enjoy it and participate in it. In a more specific way, as the synopsis says, the novel will focus more on the world of Kazakh (that's the name of Deimos world) and the players doing their own things while playing what they think is a revolutionary VRMMO and affecting this world in their own way. For the power system and more, I plan to use a system similar to the ones on RP games like D&D with some modifications (mostly simplifying the magic to some similar to spells base on physics and magic power as a resource) so if you want to get an idea about the strength of the enemies that will appear you can always check the monster manual. If you spot any misspelling or grammar errors or simply you have a suggestion, don't doubt to comment about them, since I am my own translator and editor, most probably I miss some words. Thank you and good reading.

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    Blood Heroes
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    ChangeWSA
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    Ember Land
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    raferras3yr
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    The camp where they are at the moment

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    raferras3yr
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    I will try a new method, for the moment here is the main continent, and the story ist developing on the Twilight Empire.

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    raferras3yr
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    So the sellers smell great?

    If Lucas summoned Foody now, Foody would go crazy. Although the seller was students, all of them smelled great. Lucas, who had eaten earlier, felt hungry from the smells.
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  • raferras
    raferras3yr
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    And the new clan, the furball clan made by the Mc

    For the Phoenix Clan, they specialized in Phoenix species. The Dragon Clan specialized in Dragon species. The Fairy Clan specialized in Fairy species. The Griffin clan specialized in Griffin species and the Fenrir Clan specialized in Fenrir species.
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    But considering his life and death experiencias in battle as a rank 3 he may be able to beat some rank 8

    Usually, common people would be at least Stage 1 Rank 8 when they entered high school. Those that had cultivation lower than that would be looked down upon and got bullied.
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    raferras3yr
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    A new Chapter

    It's Finally Here
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    Superstars of Tomorrow
    Sci-fi · Lazy Cliche
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    raferras3yr
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    Boss Peí you're very evil, to think that you will force Bao brother to éxit his sanctuary and to be exposed to the exterior yet again.

    Pei Qian waved his hand, obviously uninterested in listening to his excuses. "You have the most experience, and you're close to Li Yada. You're the best person for the task. This is an order—you cannot refuse!"
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    Losing Money to Be a Tycoon
    Games · Inebriation-seeking Blue Shirt
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  • raferras
    raferras3yr
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    The city castle.

    Ch 7 Entering the castle
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    raferras3yr
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    The map of Caya, so you can have a little reference for the future.

    Ch 7 Entering the castle
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  • raferras
    raferras3yr
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    I want to make the appearance that he is not hurt but, he really is, remember, at the moment he thinks he is lost, that he will never see them again and don't want to hurt or make his friend uncomfortable as it will be the last time they see each other. And about the "girl", it was "little girl" (She's not), Aaron sees Melody as immature (He was trained to be a lord from young age so he is a little more mature that your regular kit) so that's why, but after translating it, it changes to a girl that is a lot older than what I was pretending to transmit.

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    Ember Land
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