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Syanthus2yrCommentedfray is when fighting or something along those lines. Frey is a name
This was the cue for everyone to start climbing rapidly , as without the obstruction from the barrels , it was a simple dash and climb. As Jhonny engaged in the boss fight , within 3 seconds , Rudra and the other front liners caught up entering the Frey with their best long range spells causing a BANG!Â- Syanthus2yrCommented
fire hydrant, used to connect fire hoses to a source of water. usually made of metal.
Coincidentally the firehose was an old construction , there since 2020 , having rusted to the core , not being ever used. Hence it cracked under Jhonny's boot , spraying water out at high intensity! - Syanthus2yrCommented
scene* like a crime scene. seen is for objects. for example: Officer Ramirez was last seen at the crime scene.
The last seen he saw before his death was Rudra pointing at him with his thumbs down . - Syanthus2yrCommented
speech* there's no "speach"
A cuber official then gave a short speach about the spirit of the game and other typical boring stuff to which Rudra paid no attention. finally in the end , Gaia , manifested herself on the podium , and with a unearthly divine appearance , raised her arms as she said " I the overseer declare the first VR Olympics , open ! ". - Syanthus2yrCommented
plaque
Karna being right behind Rudra holding the plack , while the rest marching in files of three , the Japanese national team entered the Grand collessuem under the gazes of the world leaders. - Syanthus2yrCommented
instead of aka (also known as) you could use "i.e." which essentially means "in other words". great story btw im loving it!! ^_^
The camp would last for 90 days ... Aka 3 months. - Syanthus2yrCommented
I this case is "either" supposed to be "aether"?
Of course, Taurus wasn't having it and began a counterattack. Another bash attack but with a twist of channeling either into the horns. - Syanthus2yrCommented
instead of "affined" you could use "aligned" or just say "earth based"
"Earth affined ether" - Syanthus2yrCommented
centipedes have 100 legs, hence the centi- in their name. 1000 legs would be a millipede
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what about Gu Er? and is there a Gu Si?
''I only left Blue Forest-city for 8 days, what happened while I was gone? How did my son got hurt so badly and where are Gu Yi and Gu Shi?'' - Syanthus3yrCommented
"you were coma..." change it to 'you were comatosed..." comatose is the the state one is in while in a coma ^_^
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err on the side of caution. English is dumb with so much stupidity in its words lol
Did they expect this, or did they simply air on caution? Eldrian wondered as his eyes finally settled to the darkness, allowing him to see the faint glowing eyes of something. - Syanthus3yrCommented
leisure instead of lesaure
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banding together instead of banning
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paralyzes is the description of paralysis. so the paralysis effect wears off; instead of the paralyzes effect wears off.
Although Leon still had to use gravity ring to slow down the creatures, the result of the impact had been much better than expected. The mechanical spider trembled for several seconds until the paralyzes effect wore off. It didn't cause damage, but it left the monster completely defenseless⌠it was a success. - Syanthus3yrCommented
instead of: "and I intent to use all of it." use: "and I intend to use all of it." 'intend' is to use when describing a character wanting to do an action. 'intent' is the feeling one gets from another before that person acts, for example: killing intent; "person A looks at me with such powerful killing intent, i'm sure they intend to kill me soon."
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instead of "grade" for for what they're doing with the cheese, use "grate" its the action. grade is for the value of something.
She gives me a big loving smile that I really missed after she left, something I didn't appreciate enough. "I think that's an amazing idea sweetie. Your father and I haven't eaten since breakfast so I'll be sure to make double the hotdogs." I guess that means I'm on chili duty, I think that we have everything squared away. Mom on the other hand wants dad in on this as well. "Honey, I want you to grade the cheese. Make sure you make a big pile." I cant help feeling happiness and butterflies, I'm getting to make 3 am chili cheese dogs with my mom and dad. This feels like a dream come true and I have every intention of preserving this happiness for my family. - Syanthus3yrCommentedCh 59 Galling Swamp
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this just had me laughing my tail off đ but its true. moody would be proud of this teacher
"I must say I am quite impressed five of you managed to overcome stage one, one of you even managed to overcome stage two, it seems I underestimated Grade 1. I'll be sure to go extra hard on you all!" - Syanthus3yrCommented
similar idiom: screwed the pooch
Zhao Manyan's expression immediately darkened as if he had accidentally f**ked a dog. {TL Note: A modern Chinese slang that is commonly used for self-mocking purposes.}