taloc92
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taloc921dReplied to MagicSandCh 33 Swear and Run- taloc923mthCommented
*the
"It doesn't change the fact that our political opposition is completely discredited in front of the Republic." Gavin responded. While everyone mourned for the dead and started preparing for hte funerals, Gavin and the rest of the Marketing Department already started slobbering over the golden opportunity presented to the LMC. "It doesn't matter who is ultimately responsible, they're all made from the same cloth. The ruling coalition is finished." - taloc927mthCommentedCh 755 A new life
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*teenagers
Killer’s instincts were telling him that these two people were crazy, how could two teenegrs single handedly go against an entire gang and would do so while there were multiple other gangs watching. - taloc927mthCommented
*Austin
“Do you?” Asutin said, pulling Killer’s head even tighter. - taloc927mthCommented
*wide
Going to the door he opened it white and shut it behind him, as he did the door broke off its hinge slightly, he turned around to look at it for a few moments. - taloc927mthCommented
*Austin
‘Vlad, that kid, he helped me out so much, and right now, I have no clue where he even is, or if he’s even alright.’ Asutin thought. ‘This, just doing nothing and allowing that to happen, it's not the way I roll.’ - taloc927mthCommented
I believe "boy" should read ,"body"
As he grew stronger, the delay between what he wanted to do and his boy was getting shorter. It was perhaps because of this that Gary actually hardly struggled with adjusting to his werewolf body and using it. - taloc921yrCommentedCh 636 Justification
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"radder" should read "radar"
[ Someone is hearing your conversation from the upper floor as well as from under the ground. The one below had almost slipped from my radder. } - taloc921yrCommented
saem =same
“I told you, he was going to do something like this, we just have to go with the flow.” Innu stated as he pulled out his two red axes from behind and got in a fighting stance. Marie quickly did the saem as she saw the sheer amount of people in suits, looking towards them. - taloc921yrReplied to DaoistO9UTTOCh 3 The Vampiress Called Mechiel
- taloc921yrCommentedCh 369 Chapter 369 – Was It Right?
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how about you offer your correction and keep it moving so that the storyline may be focused on, and minor errors like this can be fixed later on.
Most of them felt that if they even tried touching it, they could seriously be invited! - taloc921yrCommentedCh 296 Creature of Light
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I believe "characteris" should read "characteristics"
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