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i don't usually write reviews but i kinda felt like i had to. the story was going good till my boy had to make it into hardcore p**r i don't mind the harem i Don't even mind the R18 scenes but it's like s*x described by somebody that doesn't know how it's done i'm almost sure not even 50 shade's describes the act that way.

katekyo hitman reborn was one of my favorite anime and I'm happy to see that there's a fanfic of it. it's kinda cool thinking about reborn characters fighting against one piece characters

this is my first time writing a review on web novel after many years of using it, but the story is kind of addictive it keeps you wanting to know what happens next. overall it got good writing a bit slow but a great story

thanks it confused me

I don't understand this part is the writer racist? or did his message got translated wrong