well done with this story would love to see them travel through other world having fun causing shenanigans image them joining fairy tail, or dxd making friends with Yasaka, or dbz. instead of kingdo building just adventure helping who they want or learning new power systems

I believe it's half what you say and half his inner fanboy I mean would you being reincarnated into Naruto and intentionally allow all the cast to not even be born?

I feel like Nami from one piece and Kazuka from this would either make the most amazing rivals or the scariest best friends ever

Please continue this fic it's probably the best dxd world building fic ever. while I'm not terribly interested in slash dog maybe just overview it then move on to dxd opening to play with the Khaos Brigade. picking on and messing with Issei, someone destroying Cao Cao for coming after Yasa, waking lilith(hoping she's good and somehow becomes super mom to our mc would be funny and awesome), mess with Vali`s gramps and a few other God's and making Sona`s peerage epic. so much potential left in this story please continue.

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obviously the notification saying this updated gave false hope you should be ashamed :x

I really like this the only issue I have is what is happening with Le Fay. 1st she gave her self up for her brother Morgan won't care about and even if a MC isn't a hero type she deserves better than being overwritten MC should try extracting Morgan's magic knowledge then reset Le Fey memory to as she went into the bio upgrade with her waking in her stronger body and some

While I liked the writing style and the initial begin the character is so dark but had a few bright spots so I kept going till he became a reaper. which just finished destroying what could have been a fantastic story if it hadn't destroyed the entire foundation the Uzimaki clan both in family first and then no Harem would survive if the male can not have children .

Please don't quite this has to be one of the best op Naruto fan fics. and the most organic fem sauske/Naruto I have ever read. Well balanced between darkness and killing and humor. and by plot once Itachi is healed its time for the training trip as well. So minus a few dates then skip to Shipppuden

i enjoyed this story even if it developed to quickly with out much binding between characters. The only real issue I have is the soul bounding needle is crap . destroyed the flow that was going so im rather glad the story stalled.

I have only read to ch 94 at this point but I believe this chapter is miss named because after the last 2 paragraph it should have been called splash damage

I really liked this story and characters both in background and development. Until chapter 150-162 then I had to force myself to read till chapter 200 and finally gave up. You destroyed the foundation of Cho Lou character completely when and after she found out she had been married without her consent. Yes she resisted but for a proud person of such a high standing who die rather than suffer a loss or indignity like that. She based on her character should have become exceptionally cold, ruthless, and far more dangerous to him. He would need to make it up to a lot of persistence and remove the married portion and woo her from the beginning again. she should have lost a great deal if not all warmth for him not to mention with her IQ how could she not realize it was him or at least someone working for him stopping her hacking. but instead she bows to it and all these assaults from him and keeps coming back without actually doing anything just destroyed her whole character for me she went from strong to be perfectly honest weak and stereotypical in this story. I still like your style of writing so Ill check in when another story comes up.