Magsy

I read this twice. Read till chapter 4. Read this again, I still have no idea what's happening. Maybe change this chapter to make things clearer?

The Author got banned? to his P@t3on, I guess...

I wish there would be more chapters today. Thank you, Author!

Great job, author! take all my stones and (possibly...if there ever will be a P@t3on) money!

Oh, get over it! nothing you can do about it. it's been a year! fooks sake.

Everytime I read stories from this Author, I sometimes think the characters have goldfish memories or author just wants word count. Every chapter, feels like it's the same as the previous one. I think this is the 8th time Robin asked steve what he's preparing for.

I also berryeve in him XD

He calls Josh Bryant self-absorbed, but he is worse than Josh Bryant. Ew.

I want more chapters...any links for a Pat or KoFi?

The first 4 chapters were pretty good. Better then the previous start. Last half of Chapter 5 is stuart regressing. He's started to accept his second life, then all of a sudden, he has a depression episode. It came outta nowhere.