nhedz

I love the flow of the story, just a simple suggestion, please remove any redundancy

rxp

Thank you for the chapter

When is the next chapter update?

Thanks for the chapter

I feel you bro

After using the fire dragon multiple times, still the proficiency still at 0. You should have given it a certain percentage too

Im sorry, im way past 35ch before I comment.Anyway, this is good novel, though it may have similarities with 2nd ranker, but i like the new type of abilities. I havent read any MC puppet master.So its new to me. I hope for future development with this abilities. Keep up the good work sir. Thank you

spot on

please lessen the use "sometime later". Also don't repeat phrases that will make the chapter longer