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Heavy usage of AI. 70 to 80 percent of content is written by AI. It's like author gave roughr idea for each chapter to ai and had it generate the full chapter. So many unnecessary descriptions, when mc sits, walks and does something simple, you don't have to use grand vocabulary to describe. But due to ai what could have been two sentences description goes on and on for forever with filler words and adjectives which doesn't really add anything to the story. Authors author novel also has same problem. Atleast that novel had original writing until first 100 or so chapter though it had many grammatical errors, writing felt genuine and humane then author started using ai for that novel as well. I have seen other authors use ai but where use it for proofreading and editing which genuinely brings up the quality. But when you don't even write rough draft and simply feed the ai your idea in few lines, this the kind of output get.
i tried to read this novel three times but unfortunately couldn't make it past 60 chapters it has really cool power system and mc is op which is the main reason I tried push through it. I was expecting a serious cultivation novel but more than half of the novel focuses on romance. it was ok at the start and thought it would gradually shift to more cultivation and serious side of the story but from what i have read so far and skimming next 50 or so chapters it continues to be focused on romance half of the chapters and at some point it becomes too much and cringey. at the start mc came across as assuring op and serious and as more and more girls he keep interacting, his character devolves into japanese beta mc.. like girls beating him up and girls ordering him around. I know it's meant to be funny but it feels really really cringey. other huge issue with the novel is that it is too wordy. what could have been interesting and quick and punchy scene devolves into endless explainatiom and dialogues which keep in going which makes you further frustrated. truly interesting parts which are cultivation and power mechanics are reduced more and more and more more time is spend on romance. at somepoint it lost serious atmosphere a cultivation novel should have.
yes AI shit made me drop this and yes it's infuriating when authors give broken abilities but never use them. He has infinite mana and all broken magic, no he goes and creates sword skills and want to fight close combat. I mean let's be honest,we came here to read a broken mc and get that quick gratification but this fails do that.
This is getting unnecessary complicated. All that reprucussion and there is no single benefit so far. Even if gets the ability to let someone sacrifice something I don't think it would be that useful anyway.
yes I agree. Cheats are kinda of disappointing.
Mentioning girl every chapter and thinking about her in every chapter.. I am.having hard time continuing this. Can someone tell if this is gonna continue?
romance part is very very very annoying.
so cringe
i am trying really really hard not to drop this