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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey1yr
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    For us muggle Americans that are semi- metric ignorant fools that translates very roughly to 3 miles maintaining a 6 minute average. So not terrible. I know a lot of Fast food addicts that might keel over doing far less. On a Side note I do not exclude myself from both previously mentioned groups. That is not a boast of pride but an admittance that I had to translate the numbers in my head before I could make a judgment on the performance of our Mr. Wu Mo

    In the beginning, he could not even last three kilometers each time, but after five days of long-distance running training, he was now able to run five kilometers in eighteen minutes.
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    Blacksmith: You Are Making Mjolnir For The Forging Exam?
    Fantasy · Absolute World's Best Sword
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey1yr
    Replied to Corwis

    I must say I understand and approve of your comment. Having a baseline for realism is beneficial as it gives us a source to understand the swordsmanship the author is conveying. However, I believe good old fashioned stoning is necessary. I Only say this as stoning wasn’t on my mind but now it is and since you are the source it sounds like a fun event.

    (Author's Note: Sword nerds please stop there. Have mercy upon my ignorant soul. The martial arts in 2065 is  very different from the modern era due to increased fitness under  NuSmoothies, so their styles have evolved slightly. Please bear with me.) 
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    Guild Wars
    Games · Kotario
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey2yr
    Commented

    One oath each and his secret is safe and they can all enter. If they even think about betrayal ... well garth brooks said it best....”and the thunder rolls!”

    However, it was not convenient for him to tell them about the Seven Treasures Exquisite Pagoda.
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    War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens
    Eastern · Feng Qing Yang
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey2yr
    Commented

    I have noticed that the terminology changes every once in a while. in this instance talisman have been interchanged with amulet. In the past even thunder and lightning have been swapped around periodically. I think it is a translation fumble, which is completely understandable as language barriers can often be translated multiple ways. While i dont think it impacts the quality if the story in any significant way, In this instance i believe it to be misleading based solely on the premise that the original description of the talisman depictes a sheet of paper. amulets dont quite fit the bill. still a very understandable error.

    It was because he had two amulets from his father only in name, Duan Ru Feng. It was not difficult to kill a Second Level Void Transformation martial artist.
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    War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens
    Eastern · Feng Qing Yang
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey2yr
    Commented

    I would Think improperly would be A more generally accepted usage in this situation but you guys are Right completely depends on how she would view a proper look.

    Since becoming familiar with Duan Ling Tian, he had not once looked at her properly.
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    War Sovereign Soaring The Heavens
    Eastern · Feng Qing Yang
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey3yr
    Commented

    I thought the talents were like 22-25. Is our main character 15 or 16 at max. i thought he awakened his martial soul at 14 and would have been roughly 15 when he joined the gale sect. Meaning he has like 10 Years to reach them and he is already compairable to most 18-20 year olds in level now. I feel like he will be god level by the time he hits 25 at this rate

    "Looks like I need to work harder! In comparison to these top talents, I am still so far behind!"
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    Warrior's Promise
    Eastern · Baili Longxia
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey3yr
    Commented

    Or create stealth bees so we don’t have to see angry Eisen again if scouts get caught and killed.

    If that was the case, and Melissa could create Bees that could precisely fertilize specific flowers and only collect their pollen, then those flowers would surely gain some benefit to it as well, right? Whether it was just a benefit to size or speed of growth, or possibly even to the efficiency when used in the making of different potions, that would be amazing! But that would require a proper plot of land as well, something that seemed more and more like something that Eisen should hurry up and acquire.
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Games · DiceVR
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey3yr
    Commented

    Yes easy, he traveled across the continent to the ocean magic city but it was just easy....

    After all, he doubted that the last of the three shards would be too hard to get, considering how easy it was to get the first and second ones.
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Games · DiceVR
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  • ctmackey
    ctmackey3yr
    Posted

    This is a wonderful novel with plenty of depth of story line. The author has create a full and intricately woven world with well-rounded characters. The only points of criticism I (and this is solely my opinion) maintain towards the reading experience is the author tends to meander around the filler and descriptions excessively at times and the story felt like it faltered at times due to this. The second and last source of criticism would be that at times the author (and this could be a issue that arises from translation error) forget to maintain storyline momentum. Rather, the details tend to be misrepresented at times. For example (not a spoiler but random reference) if our hero had one million bars of gold, in a later chapter it may be incorrectly mentioned again as one hundred thousand instead. All this being said, if you enjoy a good read with depth and you can ignore a few minor issues along the way then this is a wonderful choice of experience for you. Thanks.

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    End of the Magic Era
    Fantasy · Zhuang Bifan
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