Jondh3142

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Using Rings as a focus is actually a lot smarter than wands in the mixed world. Especially due to the inherent danger of the gates. It will change some fundamental aspects of the HP world, though. I'm so stoke for more chapters though!

Just the way the Author plans on merging the 2 worlds seems phenomenal. The idea that the Gates have been around since the Old Age and The Wizarding World has kept it hidden is an amazing idea. It makes sense on how to bring a low level magic world like the world of hp to the level of solo leveling. I really hope that the Author doesn't make the MC completely broken with the Shadow Monarchs abilities. If the Author can blend the 2 worlds magic.

Perfect so far. Please keep releasing!!!!

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I would like to point out that the 3rd chapter is in Spanish. I would like to continue reading but I don't read Spanish.

Just the first chapter shows that it is different than sudukos. Though the summary is similar there is only so much one can do to make a hp legacy story take place during Canon. It could be similar in alot of ways but the start of the stories are extremely different already.

This book is not a repost of someone else's finished book on fanfic.net under the name JustBored21. The title is Silver King. As well as your other book is also JustBored21's book which named Apex. Atleast give credit where it is due instead of making it seem like these stories are yours.

this book is already on the site. it already been completed as well. this is blatant plagiarism.

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