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I'm currently very confused..... I don't now what he is talking about sometimes... Then he skips to another section... Look it's a good read... But it need more flow and constancy.

It's really good. Thanks for creating it

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Very good story, I really enjoy it . Thanks for creating it.................so please update more regularly. Like every few hours would be good 😊.........

Very good story. Just wish it could update more frequently, but I know how difficult and long it would take to write such a good novel. I am truly grateful to the author, you have given me a great novel to read and enjoy.

It's good..........................................................................why do I have to put 140 characters, before i can post. So stupid.

some transitions between chapters are confusing and make no sense l. I think there are 2 such in the first 100 chapters. where the following chapter is in a completely different setting, action he is doing and where he is. this again happens at chapter 110 going into 111. how the heck did him sneaking into the cave, killing 1 bandit, transition to home now suddenly fighting the people chasing him for killing the bandit boss. it's so confusing at times. also a proof reader is needed, there are minor issues that need fixed. overall a good novel.

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Good novel, just needs someone to proof read and check grammar. Storyline is good. I enjoy the character development. Well not much else I can say, since this stupid website won't let me post a review unless it is more than 140 words. Really so stupid to put that restriction.

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