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celefoata_

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  • celefoata_
    celefoata_1yr
    Posted

    Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs a bit of work and the story feels very dry. Characters feel really dry too, it's just a very... dry story. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.

    altalt
    The Descent of Dawn
    Fantasy · xash_alan
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  • celefoata_
    celefoata_1yr
    Posted

    Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, too many run-on sentences, and the story feels dry. Paint dries faster than your story progresses.

    altalt
    endeavour to utopia
    Sci-fi · gintoki_
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  • celefoata_
    celefoata_1yr
    Posted

    Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, sentence structure feels weird, and the story feels clunky. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.

    altalt
    Re-Writing. Search Name Of Cover To Read New Version.
    Fantasy · TheHeavenlySleeper
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  • celefoata_
    celefoata_3yr
    Commented

    You discord nerds, I'm still the tler

    Ch 1924 Silver Alchemy Celestial Alchemist
    altalt
    Unrivaled Medicine God
    Eastern · Feng Yise
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