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SilverWear21

SilverWear21

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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear211mth
    Commented

    Turtle, not a clam

    Ch 50 50_1
    altalt
    Becoming the Villain's Discarded Wife
    History · Yan Zhi
    detail
  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear211mth
    Commented

    you are missing words

    Ch 200 Chapter 200: You're the One I'm Slaughtering (3)
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    Dumb Doctor
    History · Lazy language
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear211mth
    Commented

    bit confused. "but an even more feeling" ... more than what?

    Ch 762 One Sword Spiritual Grandmaster, Beasts Appeared!
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    The Ninth Sister is a Prodigious Beast Master
    General · Heavenly Charm
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear211mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 411 Qingqing Woke Up, Tossed to the Sharks (1)
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    After Having Everything Taken Away, She Returns As A God
    Urban · Qing Qian
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear212mth
    Commented

    Like the word usages, "keen" is not a commonly used word in the US these days (actually just had to explain/define the word for my 18 year old a few days ago)

    Ch 86 Chapter 86: Exploring the Cave_1
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    The Lucky Heiress
    History · Yet Another Earworm
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear212mth
    Commented

    Not worth it. In theory, could have been a good book

    Ch 779 246: Two Bosses Competing in Acting Skills_4
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    Substitute Marriage: Reborn As The Top Big-Shot
    General · Deutsche Unforgotten
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear212mth
    Commented

    ok, loving the book but I have one logic issue that is bothering me. People keep nodding at the FL and the story continues as if she can see the nod. She is blind, there needs to be a vocalization or some other cue to make it viable

    Ch 57 The First Snowflake
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    Saved By The Mad Duke
    Fantasy · yoojee
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear212mth
    Commented

    added

    Ch 332 Spirit Carrots
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    Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
    Fantasy · Littlecarrot
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear212mth
    Commented

    Finally!!! An author that comprehends the actual concept of a bag of holding/space bag. I applaud you for not putting one space bag into another. Putting it in a separate "world" makes sense, kudos to you

    Ch 174 Divine Space Green Bell
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    Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road
    Fantasy · Littlecarrot
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear212mth
    Commented

    Never apologize for a long chapter, idk bout others but I, personally love them

    Ch 100 THE PRESS CONFERENCE (2)
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    My Life As The First S-Class Guide
    Urban · sola_cola
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear213mth
    Commented

    In desperate need of an editor

    The elevator jerked again. Su Qing was sure already that she was going to die here today.
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    The Good For Nothing Miss Su : Becoming the Ultimate Hidden Boss
    History · CoffeePrincess
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear213mth
    Commented

    sometimes it does bother me

    His anger was like a flame burning in his heart. The unwillingness and humiliation were ramming into his chest, and he wished he could tear a big hole in his chest.
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    After Transmigrating into a Cannon Fodder Character in the 1980s, I Trash Them All
    Urban · Carefree Leaf-Talk
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear213mth
    Replied to SilverWear21

    sorry spell correction

    He had a goal when he slept. He hoped that in his dream, he would be enlightened like James Watson and become the greatest mathematician in the world! Yes, he was Liu Kai. He was male, 188cm tall, and had bronze skin, short hair, and sharp eyes. Everyone thought that he was the new physical education teacher at first glance, but in fact, he was just an ordinary weak man who liked mathematics. His greatest hobby was calculating fractal geometry and complex power systems. His life goal was to become a great mathematician.
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    After Giving up, the Fake Young Lady Was Group-Pampered
    Urban · Ju Ju
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear213mth
    Commented

    ok, at this point you are deliberately throwing out knowledge to educate. As a parent I strongly approve however as an old person, I just skim

    The basic metabolic rate of Yue Lingfeng was 10*73(kg)+6.25*185(cm)-(5*20)+5=1791.25.
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    After Giving up, the Fake Young Lady Was Group-Pampered
    Urban · Ju Ju
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear213mth
    Posted

    Pretty good story, I like it. I am at the 300 chapter mark and the only reading issues I have had was point 1) getting names mixed up and 2) gender mistakes dad being mom and mom being dad.Decent editor could fix both but as a frequent reader, not hard to overlook.Overall, good job

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    Lucky Star of Space on Farmlands
    General · Gentle And Lovely
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear213mth
    Commented

    That's not being dramatic but realistic. Feeding every 2 hours, changing diapers every time, it just becomes muscle memory. With my eldest (now older than I was when I had him) I remember I wasn't worrying if I had fed or changed him. I knew I had or there would have been a ruckus. Was more concerned if I remembered to point it down. If not, he peed on someone

    Ch 462 Chapter 464: She is too confused
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    Abandoned Woman Busy Farming
    General · Qingka
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear214mth
    Commented

    consistency in translations is admirable. What is a parantha? I thought it was a pancake...

    Ch 195 Chapter 195: Lend a Helping Hand or Ride the Autumn Breeze?
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    Abandoned Woman Busy Farming
    General · Qingka
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear215mth
    Commented

    kudos to you! You actually made me have to stop and think when you pit in the little red hen reference. Big two thumbs up for that, it is going into my "confuse people" notebook lol

    Ch 276 Dancing With The Devil
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    Star's Ships
    Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear215mth
    Replied to Devilbesideyou666

    best thing bout snow (aside from making teens work) is curling up with "peppermint" hot chocolate... sshhh kids don't need to know it's schaps not candy canes ...

    Ch 257 The Beginning of the End
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    Star's Ships
    Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666
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  • SilverWear21
    SilverWear215mth
    Commented

    LOL, snow? send some my way to torture my teen with shoveling. Good chapterSide Note: Merciless needs new furs...

    Ch 257 The Beginning of the End
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    Star's Ships
    Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666
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