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    dss2yr
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    Thanks for the review! Also thanks for the idea. I never read realistic fiction, reading some would help me write better.

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    dss2yr
    Replied to MaxRead

    I was only comparing countries, nothing to do with continents. Also African continent is only less than twice as big as Russia.

    The west wall cuts three to four kilometres into the enormous Silver Bark forest named after the silver bark oak trees native to that forest that lies on the western border of the Frost Swallow country. The forest is so massive that it is said to be atleast five times the size of the country which itself is close to twenty million square kilometres which is bigger than the biggest country back on earth, Russia. It is filled with dangerous swamps, chilling lakes, mountains, poisonous lands and many perilous places. It is even said to contain beasts equivalent to nascent soul realm cultivators in prowess. And ofcourse it contains many precious and rare resources and is frequented by many cultivators. The sect alse frequently sends expeditions into the forest. There are many missions in the Mission Hall that require one to enter the silver bark forest.
    altalt
    One Average Cultivator
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    dss2yr
    Replied to lelisPw

    An Average Cultivator is the original one. Copy pasted in the other one for a contest. Initially wanted to stop updating it after the contest but it's collections spiked after being featured. Now I'm not sure which one to continue with. The first one is sentiment, the second is a bit ahead in the race, which one do you think I should drop? I wanna stick with sentiment and get it contracted. What do you think?

    Ch 29 Growth
    altalt
    An Average Cultivator
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    dss2yr
    Replied to mbrapshT

    Thanks for the review and don't worry he does get better.

    altalt
    An Average Cultivator
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    dss2yr
    Replied to mbrapshT

    There are many things wrong with his brain. Which do you mean?

    Ch 7 Dilemma
    altalt
    An Average Cultivator
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  • dss
    dss2yr
    Replied to Animesh_Tewary

    Thanks for the feedback. The MC's supposed to be exactly like you described for the first part which I intended to end around chapter 15. I guess I got carried away writing and we'll have atleast 4 more chapters of loser mc. Sorry about that. I'll be careful in the future. He'll be much more reserved, quiet in the next part. You'll never see the loser mc again. Well, not this kind of irritating loser.

    Ch 18 Obliteration Fist
    altalt
    An Average Cultivator
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  • dss
    dss3yr
    Replied to amaturewriter

    Yes, search urumi weapon on the net. I didn't want to use whip sword as it could be sectioned.

    "I can't say. Senior sister Mu Peipei has her whole family supporting her. They have tool refiners that excel in making the ribbon sword. Senior brother Na on the other hand cannot afford to order non mainstream weapons."
    altalt
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    dss3yr
    Replied to amaturewriter

    Being low key when weak is the logical thing to do. The first chapter his fear and logic spoke. Mainly fear. This time he lost his logic and fear to the excitement that he felt when an MC crushes everyone with his money in auctions. The mc right now is a fickle minded, impulsive, weak willed fellow. His character will grow as the novel moves forward. I realise this scene could've been done better but I just couldn't get the words. I am working on my writing and will soon get it up to standard. Keep pointing out my mistakes till then. Thanks!

    Zhang Wuji was covered with sweat. His outer robe lost somewhere in the mess. He took a final deep breath and threw himself on the bed. He did not even care about the mess on it. 'Why did I have to bid 6 gold? That is 1 year's pocket money. I did not even want to bid that amount. It just happened involuntarily. Haah fuck it, there's nothing I can do now. Might as well take the pill and sleep. I'll deal with the mess tomorrow.'
    altalt
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    dss3yr
    Replied to amaturewriter

    He is under the delusion that like all transmigration novels, he will get some cheat and rule the world. He is the main character and superior to all others. But in reality he still is insecure, impulsive and all that he was previously. The mix lead to doing or saying some stuff and regretting when it backfires. I hope it makes sense.

    "You... I... you just wait. When I reach qi condensation I'll make you kneel and beg for mercy."
    altalt
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    dss3yr
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    I realise it may be slow without a cheat so how about this wait a month for the chapters to accumulate and then read. By then I will have the mc ready and it would be a pure cultivation novel.

    Ch 7 Dilemma
    altalt
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  • dss
    dss3yr
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    He'll grow to become one of the strongest like any other cultivation novel so he obviously will have his own special talent. Don't worry it is a cultivation novel and his strength will pick up speed around chapter 40.

    Ch 7 Dilemma
    altalt
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  • dss
    dss3yr
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    Thanks for the review! The novel is mainly about the changes in his way of thinking and character. One can not become a proper cultivator without a strong dao heart. The first thirty or so chapters would only be introduction of the sect, country and his character. Then the hidden talent would be introduced. Read it till around 30. You'll get the idea of what the novel is about. If I'm able to write properly what is in my head you'll be hooked. By the way if you don't like Renegade Immortal and Pursuit of Truth by Er Gen then this one's not for you( if you haven't already read them I suggest you go and read them they're my favourites in Eastern Fantasy especially RI its awesome). The novel would follow a similar mood as is set in the major portions of the books in the first half of the book but is definitely not even close to as depressing as Pursuit of Truth.

    altalt
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