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anubis1650

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  • anubis1650
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    While I get the whole King and Prussia and such and King Robert recognized him as the King of Prussia they're not really saying anything about the king of Westeros which I think would generate a lot of problems if that is not acknowledged.

    "If you approach Bloodstone, you will see several pieces of wood with pirates impaled on it, proving that the Stepstones are now controlled by the Kingdom of Prussia, and anyone who wishes to pass must pay the toll," I said, looking at the merchants.
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    Blood And Iron (ASOIAF/GoT)
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    I think you might have got a little too overboard on the blessings but that's just me

    With the blessing of the Merling King, the sea creatures will aid to your will.
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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
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    "If you doubt that I am the leader, I can prove it by sending them to kick your butts out of here. What do you say?" Jon mocked.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • anubis1650
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    I only know a handful of fanfics that dispose of her in the right way. Which means horrible or funny kind of wanted to read about her going on a 7 rant and a giant punting her between two towers then make a goal sign lol.

    "Yes, Milady," said the septa, not happy with Arya's behavior.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • anubis1650
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    I truly don't know what to say if he thinks a better environment for your son/nephew is to send them to the coldest Dam miserable place ever with murderers rapists and thieves and think it is a better environment than Winterfell that should probably tell you're doing something wrong. Oh and best yet don't forget the malcontents who've lost the Rebellion who now have an easy target to take out their frustrations who can not fight back because that's going to work out so well. At that point in time it might not be worse if you tell Tywin Lannister he's a bigger joke than his father then send him to casterly rock lol.

    He only sent the boy to the Wall because he saw how unhappy he was in Winterfell, his expression from that day in the solar still haunting him. He wanted to leave the boy with Benjen for a while, thought it would be better than in the castle environment.
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    Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT
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  • anubis1650
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    ch 1-25 review- I have to say I really like the story it's got a little bit of everything with that being said the only very minor gripe I have is the character descriptions they're kind of short and you really don't truly know what the OCS look like. I'm hoping the author will do a better character description or put a picture in and say this guy/girl with whatever changes to make to fit what ever he has in mind. By the way I think it would be hilarious if you had Harley(Dc Comics) show up even if it was just for a gag. Why because for some reason I think Harley in Game of Thrones would just be hella funny. 😁

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    Game of Thrones: Auron Blackfyre's Tale
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  • anubis1650
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    Commented

    Any chance we can get some pics for the characters nothing crazy just this guy with these changes like black hair instead of whatever color it is different skin tone and whatnot

    Ch 14 Chapter 13
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  • anubis1650
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    👍 Thank you for the clarification

    Note: Remember that all of these skills are already learned, ingrained in his brain. Not wearing only slows proficiency when performing such skills. There's no unlearning.
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    Looking forward to reading this but I do have to say that there really needs to be a tag or a warning in the synopsis. I'm not bothered by whether it's harem polygamous or single Romance etc but no matter what I think there should be a heads up on the type of romance that includes any other sexual tags as well

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    [HPxJJK] - Harry Potter and the Supremacy of Cursed Blood
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  • anubis1650
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    Would love for some pictures even if they're not perfect or identical even if it's just this guy with shorter hair or red hair Etc at least for the OCS

    Ch 21 Characters and Description
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    Tales of Son of the Lucifer
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  • anubis1650
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    I have to say I really like this story it's a fresh take on the Song of Ice and Fire series instead of just following Canon or the characters of Cannon around it more travels in the world and makes its own story while I have no doubt it will start running into a lot more Canon characters and events I have to say it's pretty original for a fanfic. I have no idea why Gratiz gave such a Negative review. I'm guessing either he's a fan of more action-packed and combat(fight scenes every ch) than World/kingdom building and storytelling or he likes characters who walk around in God mode(super op) just squashing everything is my only conclusion and if that's the case I can understand why he gave that review.

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    House Of The Dragons (HOTD) : Orphan SI
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    Is there a picture of the armor or a concept look it's based off of right now considering it said something about a long coat on picturing Kirito from sword?

    Which is specifically designed by her for his requirements, in this armour his movement won't be restricted because it's light and flexible
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    Danmachi: The Blind Swordsman
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    1-41 Review I have to say for a first attempt this is actually pretty good. I do have a few issues mostly be being it's straight up Canon with a Sprinkle of some extra don't get me wrong the extra is actually very good but there's no real deviation when he's clearly interacting at least somewhat with the Canon characters and should be making a difference even if small. It makes it even less when a lot of the extra content is written songs. I would have to say now that we're in second year I'm really hoping for at least some minor Canon changes at the very least.

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    Hogwarts: the magic of music
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    This is meddling giant by Cloud9stories on fanfiction are you taking over this fanfic or have the authors permission to post? I know he has not updated since May 1st and was wondering if you were picking this up because he dropped it or I don't like to accuse but have stolen the story and claiming it as your own.

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    I have to be honest I've been knocking this around in my head since he announced that he was giving Rhaegar Targaryen a armor suit made of cloud Steel. I still can't figure out why he would do that that's very close to just giving him the win because if things play mostly out as they didn't Canon it'll end up with Robert and Rhaegar fighting pretty much in single combat and that would give him a huge advantage when I'm pretty sure that was supposed to be a close battle before any kinds of Butterfly Effects. Kind of the same thing with helping Randle Tarly before the war might cause Robert Baratheon to be caught/defeated in Ashford and I was always under the impression while he didn't want to mess directly with Cannon too much but he didn't want Rhaegar to win. He's kind of stacking the deck in the royalists favor or I'm I wrong? One of the things that really gave me the impression of him not wanting Rhaegar to win was he's counting on the sack of Kings Landing to happen which doesn't happen unless Robert wins because Tywin was sitting on the fence till a clear winner came out.

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    Game of Thrones: Victor Di Natale
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  • anubis1650
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    I think a little of both is the best option have them for the most part fight among themselves getting the benefits of what Lother is doing eventually they unite enough to beat him back to that it's mutual insured destruction if they continue or both are too exhausted and out of resources of men to continue Conquest or retaking anything else maybe him holding a few cities at the end or even him being forced back enough that he conquers only Tyrosh and Lys then starts fortifying the step stones. Another idea is he does his Conquest thing but in reality he's building a new city in the disputed lands that's completely fortified and only he's really doing is draining the resources and Manpower of the free cities while building his New Jerusalem. The reason I say the disputed lands is we've seen the step Stones done quite a few times but no one really has done a city in the disputed lands saved one fanfic I know. The usual reason I think is because everyone wants to disputed lands but since there's so many Powers after it no one can really hold it unless if you drain all their power and resources and have already have a truly Advanced fortified City maybe not as ridiculous as Attack on Titans but you get the drift from my mentioning that.

    Ch 113 Consultation(not a chapter)
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  • anubis1650
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    So far a good start but with only seven chapters only time will tell the only small nitpick I have is the chapters are short but it's not a really big deal if they updates are fast in my opinion. I'm looking forward to how this will progress hopefully it's not a pump and dump meaning the author will put out a couple chapters and drop it

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    The fake samurai from Game of Thrones
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  • anubis1650
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    I have to say I like the chapter but I do have a small disagreement of his completely stepping back from making Pharmaceuticals. I could understand it a little more if he treated it more as a on and off Hobby rather than him busting his butt on it. The reason being is he knows basically the future and making penicillin(at the very least) and stockpiling it would be a truly worthwhile endeavor. Especially since penicillin should take a very long while and time-consuming to find the right strain of mold. After that it's pretty straightforward and easy cultivating penicillin and making it but like I said finding the right strain of mold is extremely time-consuming giving his Limited technology and means.

    Ch 11 The Birth of the Red Viper
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  • anubis1650
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    The school system came across a little too cultish for me. I could understand him throwing a little subtlety of following his lead and more dedication to the North and the old gods but that kind of screamed more cult leader obey me and let's take control of the North.

    Ch 175 CHAPTER 175
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    A Druid In Game Of Thrones
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  • anubis1650
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    Excellent chapter I really like how everything was set up and laid out and I always love to see arrogant people who think everything's about them get kicked in the a$$. I will say I don't think you should have described the Prussian District as a city within a city but more of a fortified town/fortress. Because if I remember right their District was the location of the Dragon pit which was very big but not big enough to be thought of as a city granted a Prussian town probably makes their best cities look like a crap hole in comparison but I always thought that difference between a city and a town is population and size. I would actually be very interested in having Lothar show up as a mystery night to slaughter key people so Prussian hands stay clean. That or Reading an omake where instead of Charles and the Prussian Knights compete in the tournament Lothar does it would be a good comedy Slaughter LOL.

    Ch 104 Yesterday's friend is today's enemy II
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