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Madballosa2mthCommentedNot uzumaki hall?
This book has been deleted.- Madballosa8mthCommented
Or you know he could just take 1 woman? I know I know I´m crazy for thinking that 1 Woman would be enough. .
Four have already been confirmed, only one will actually get married to him, and she will give birth to his heir. While the MC could bend the laws, it would undermine the rule of his future heir. Most fics that tend to have their MC marry multiple women, seem to forget that they are leaving their Kingdom in a very chaotic situation after their deaths. Of course, just having multiple kids, means they're bound to be in conflict in the future, so Erlend will introduce both legal and magical means to avoid it. - Madballosa9mthReplied to TheMainPlagiaris
Which Chinese Naruto novel have you read? So far, most of them seem to portray Itachi similarly a monster, a son of a dog, an unfaithful child, and so on. Honestly, I've yet to come across a Chinese author who hasn't depicted Itachi as a villain or has simply overlooked him. But glorify him? That's interesting. Can you tell me where you read such a novel ? I'm genuinely interested.
Of course he doesn't have any affection for Uchiha Itachi, a father-killing, mother-killing beast. - Madballosa9mthReplied to lvlZeroGamer
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'Well, well, well. What do we have here? The bedridden woman is clearly this body's mother. She definitely needs a bath.' After delivery, the sheets were stained with blood, urine, and feces. - Madballosa11mthCommented
"I am going crazy, or are there a lot of fics in the past couple of months with how do you describe them? Flowery words? With lots of words like unyielding, determination, gravity of the situation, and stuff like that inside the fics? And I thought that maybe it was a clone or something like that, but no. She intentionally chose to go with someone she knew was lying while she was in enemy territory. That's just...
As Kushina lay on the ground, utterly drained and her consciousness slipping into darkness, the captain of ROOT swiftly approached, aiming to capture her and expedite their departure from the area. However, as the captain moved closer, a peculiar occurrence took place. The swirling mark on Kushina's forehead, the symbol of her power, ignited with an intense light. Startled, the ROOT ninja froze in his tracks, unable to move. In an instant, a colossal fire vortex consumed not only the captain but also all others present within the Four Violet Flames Formation. The raging flames surged skyward, forming a towering pillar of fire that obliterated the once-enclosing barrier. In its wake, a protective wall of formidable flames shielded Kushina, providing her with an unyielding sanctuary. - Madballosa11mthCommented
Writing anything down and keeping it in a world like Naruto is a mistake, especially in an unknown language. I mean it's a world full of cheap knock of Nick Fury´s, and writing anything in an unknown language or in a code is ..... And no, people will not think that this is a childish game or random lines.
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I said thank you before I left [img=recommend]
"...Since you insist…" He said with a resigned tone. - Madballosa1yrCommented
And still can't notice that she is spying on him...
'Of course not… he is much stronger than I am!' She thought to herself with extreme certainty. Though she doesn't realise that he is weary of her because of all the things he knows. - Madballosa1yrCommentedHe was now a tall, lean man, his presence captivating the senses. His hair - Strands of chestnut brown, intricately woven with vibrant streaks of mysterious purple, bestowed upon him an aura of otherworldly allure.
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Better a coward than a corpse .
It was the same for going out to do missions. In his opinion, if he did not have enough ability to protect himself, he would definitely not take a step out of the sect. - Madballosa1yrCommentedQuicksilver was initially wary, fearing a trap. But Wanda intervened, her voice laced with conviction, and he reluctantly followed his sister, his protective instincts refusing to let her go alone. With Wanda's magic lifting them, the siblings entered the gargantuan aircraft through an opening provided by SHIELD. The stage was set for a pivotal discussion between one of the most powerful organizations in the world and the enigmatic "Rebirth" organization.
- Madballosa1yrCommented
An old shinobi who must have fought hundreds of battles is shocked about a simple clone technique. ? That's a little ...
Kagutsuchi materialized beside Daichi using his shunpo technique and sliced him in half. However, to Kagutsuchi's shock, Daichi's body transformed into rocks. - Madballosa1yrCommented
Why does almost everyone who was reborn into Westeros need to build a Guitar ? Or an other instrument? or Sing ? Not dissing the story, just asking.
I do not just have an I-pod in my head full of songs so it is slow going and based on memory and my own trial and error. It is a lifelong passion to pursue and will leave my 'mark' upon this world in an unforgettable way. But instruments I feel like I can make any of them as I just have this 'programmed' knowledge of how they work and how they should be built. - Madballosa1yrReplied to Brutality
The enemies find out what the MC´s powers are because most Mc´s are braindead idiots who can only think with their dicks?
"I can see why you kept your power a secret," said Nezu. "Even if it were just the power to ascertain a person's identity, your Quirk is remarkable. The power to quantify a person's attributes and freely allocate your own is simply outstanding." - Madballosa1yrCommented
How does he know that the ability will grow stronger with the Helm of Darkness without having the Helm of Darkness? And without The Helm being created?
Phobikinesis: I have absolute control and divine authority over the power of fear. This ability grows even more powerful with the Helm of Darkness. - Madballosa1yrCommented
Only Men?
It was sudden, but to him, Enel represented hope. Sengoku hoped that, like Enel, other promising young men would choose to join the Marines instead of going ahead and becoming pirates. - Madballosa1yrCommentedMeanwhile, Thornir was taking a nice relaxing bath in his Keep after the meeting. As King, he was not alone as he had people who would wash him in there with him. Not saying that he couldn't do it himself but who would want to when you can have 4 ladies do it for you.
- Madballosa1yrCommented
This Novel had so much promise, but I just can't deal with that cringe feast and the stupid of the Mc Bye and have fun reading this ?
His helpless expression annoyed Xin Ruo. She didn't want to see this attitude from someone she thought of as her man. - Madballosa1yrCommented
Okay, I'm the only one who finds the Mc childish and a little stupid ? Mumbling things like that out loud, and then becoming angry when he is dismissed?
Irked by the Man's behaviour Ikasa immediately hissed with suppressed fury, "Why are you being rude, Mister?" - Madballosa1yrCommented
Ok, I just started reading this novel. And I must say, I'm impressed, most if not all novels have the woman who gives birth looks like a Supermodel. Where the mother looks radiant, and the father is a Buff/handsome man. Soooo CONGRATS you are better than 99,999% of the authors on this site(Something that is easily archived). Hopefully, you stay this way and don´t disappoint me with cliches or stupidy.
'Well, well, well. What do we have here? The bedridden woman is clearly this body's mother. She definitely needs a bath.' After delivery, the sheets were stained with blood, urine, and feces.