Watari

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Watari10 days ago
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foreshadowing?
Owen chuckled, shaking his head. "You do have a point there, which is why he should go to a club like Liverpool."
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
Wataria month ago
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Liverpool bro. imagine him linking up with mane, salah and firmino, shit would be 🔥
And for that team Tristan is transfering to has to be in the Premier League, I do a poll later for the team but I do have one in mind right now.I don't know much about the other four leagues and its just gonna be too much work and time that I dont have, I'm already crashing out with my assignments and tests. Everyday I'm closer to having a mental breakdown, this story is just me trying to ignore reality for a hour or two. Also we are not doing fucking Spurs, have some sense of shame for those even saying that. Like look in the mirrow and tell yourself you are better than that.
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
Wataria month ago
Commented
hope he go to Liverpool, as one of the comment mentioned at this point both team are quite shtty. better Liverpool as I'm a Liverpool fan, and i dont see any fic with mc at Liverpool yet hehehe
How's the story going so far? I won't lie, it's not exactly the best work so far, as the best ones I have written are after the World Cup and when the Premier League starts, as I started writing more original chapters. Also, for anyone that reads that Chinese story knows that that MC goes to Manchester United for some weird ass, I plan on rewriting that to another team and just making that story mine at that point. But that's not set in stone yet; we'll see how that goes.
England's Greatest
Celebrities · Sinbad_12
Watari6 months ago
Commented
galactic battleship = galaticos
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Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog
Watari6 months ago
Commented
doesn't really see it? what did this sentence even mean, man
"That Mata is really good, Soldado is also very good, and Xavi Garcia doesn't really see it. However, Real Madrid's youth training has always been very good, they just lack the soil for promotion and training. Wen, Lu Wen and others were abandoned." Rijkaard felt rather regretful.
Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog
Watari6 months ago
Commented
is not = did not do that
That was three days later.
Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog
Watari6 months ago
Commented
stretch thin
"Consecutive away games against such difficult opponents. Ramos is suspended with a red card, and Zidane and others need to be rotated. This makes Gao Shen really stretched."
Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog
Watari6 months ago
Commented
gave = given
The referee also knew what was going on, so neither side gave a penalty, but each gave a warning, and the game continued.
Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog
Watari6 months ago
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lose the chain? wth does this even mean? come on, man, please proofread a bit. dont just pump out new chapters. this story is really good to have this kind translation quality
"You have veterans who have played football for many years and have more experience than me. You should know that the more critical moments are like this, the easier it is to lose the chain. The most terrible thing is not the opponent in front of us, but ourselves."
Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog
Watari6 months ago
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hi boss. just want to give feedback, ur translation quality really dropped as compared to early chapters. almost all sentences have grammar issues. some sentences doesn't seem coherent
Ch 112 Your Son Is Going to Fight for No. 1 in the World!
Starting With Real Madrid
Celebrities · Junkdog