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Skaviouz

Skaviouz

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A figure in the night.

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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz23h
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    Prediction: I want to say that double sasuke should lose, but maybe he will get lucky and kill him once or twice, but ultimately has to run away with a few scratches? So with two deaths, Kakuzu will lose two of his chakra hearts?

    "Hehe, forget it. I don't care who you are anymore. Leave all your money, and I can spare your life," Kakuzu said with a sparkle in his green eyes. "I've fought against Konoha's First Hokage. There were winners and losers. I don't know, how strong is your fake Uchiha Madara?"
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    Naruto: Double Sasuke Is Way Too Overpowered!
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    Skaviouz1d
    Commented

    this would making running away and escaping easier because if you don't even know where you will teleport to, how would others chase after you?

    His adventures served as a reminder that even in a world filled with peril and strife, there's always room for a good laugh, especially when it involves an Uchiha and his uncontrollable power to teleport at the sight of animals.
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    Naruto: An Uchiha With A Superpower Roulette
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz1d
    Commented

    Let's think, if you remove his connections and ostracise our MC, isn't that enough reason to rebel and turn traitor? He already has the forbidden techniques, and if you don't reward him and punish him, he'll turn traitor. Do you want him to freely teach the enemies of the Leaf the techniques? Also, don't forget everyone, he should have gained 20% after killing Han, so he's a legit kage-level ninja now. He can easily escape the village if he turns traitor, plus can't he use FTG/Flying Thunder God? Good luck catching someone without shackles, his family is already disassociating with him lul!

    Ch 69 Chapter 69 Anger
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    Konoha: The Template System
    Anime & Comics · Tobi_444
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz2d
    Commented

    hmm wasn't the original purpose of ninjutsu something from the nin-shu religion where they shared chakra to understand each other?

    Anko thought in her mind, and she decided to check her teacher's library later. She knew that her teacher had collected all kinds of books, and there must be some that would speak of this matter.
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    Naruto: Different Perks
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz2d
    Commented

    that's cool.

    This way, they could keep their pieces on the chess board, and move them with their mind.
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    Naruto: Different Perks
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz4d
    Replied to iliacube

    thanks for the synopsis :D

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    Bleach: Bonds of causality
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz5d
    Replied to Bronz_Deck

    I'd say just do what you feel is acceptable and stick to it :D

    A/N: I have changed how the Boosted Gear works because really, it never worked the way it said it did. If it did go like 2x 4x 8x 16x... Issei would have split the entire Underworld in half with a single punch. And if it went 2x 3x 4x... Issei would not have been strong enough. I will just chalk this up to the sacred gear system being buggy(Ishibumi forgot). How Boosted Gear or anything works really is not properly explained so I am going off of my own interpretation, if you have problems with it call it an AU or whatever. Also, Ddraig can only speak when the Boosted Gear is active.
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    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz5d
    Commented

    I feel 2x every times is cannon, but maybe you can use tier modifiers or soft caps? Maybe each additional boost is less effective? 5 Boosts should reach 32x, but maybe you can say 2x -> 1.98x -> 1.96x -> 1.94x -> 1.92; so after 5 boosts it's 27x instead of 32x?

    A/N: I have changed how the Boosted Gear works because really, it never worked the way it said it did. If it did go like 2x 4x 8x 16x... Issei would have split the entire Underworld in half with a single punch. And if it went 2x 3x 4x... Issei would not have been strong enough. I will just chalk this up to the sacred gear system being buggy(Ishibumi forgot). How Boosted Gear or anything works really is not properly explained so I am going off of my own interpretation, if you have problems with it call it an AU or whatever. Also, Ddraig can only speak when the Boosted Gear is active.
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    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz6d
    Commented

    is this the wrong fanfic? I am confused why it's one piece now? Or did I remember the last chapter wrongly?

    Ch 29 Chapter 29
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    Naruto: Double Sasuke Is Way Too Overpowered!
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz7d
    Commented

    uhm, Kitamari / Marin_Kitawaga, they have 10 stories listed on their patreon... Considering your accusation, does this mean the other 9 stories are also stolen from others too?

    The fic's name is HP: The Magical Gamer by Kitamari.
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    The Overpowered Gamer (Harry Potter)
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz7d
    Commented

    I read the dozen main comments so far, to summarize what people say: reaction speed. People keep mentioning foundation, like how Naruto's best with Rasengan. It's because he spends so much time practicing with it as it's his primary combat method, especially with shadow clones. I also want to mention that the it's cannon that his seal is enhanced, it literally is three lines instead of a single long line. So the creation process is probably easier, so he can make many FTG tools/kunai. So I suspect that it's a difference in the seal that slows Tobirama down, and not because his lesser sensing ability? I think Tobirama's FTG uses his own body/talent as a crutch while minato used his knowledge to make FTG easier to use and ended up with a supperior FTG?

    I want to hear your thoughts on it to avoid any possible plot hole.
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    Konoha: The Template System
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz9d
    Commented

    Beach means easy fish resource while mountain means easy fresh water resource... How about a mountain that's next to a beach? You already mentioned crabs and natural hot springs... I think you should do both!

    Beach or mountain? 
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    Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz9d
    Commented

    Physique, while others say it means physical, even if I don't speak spanish, phenetically and sounding it out, it does sound like physical, but that's too similar to taijutsu? So I am going to assume this means physique or indirectly the chakra quality?

    [Físico]
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    Naruto: Evolution
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz11d
    Replied to Tyler_Henline_7485

    I didn't want to say horse-shoes when I already wrote down rabbit feet, so I picked the next best thing. But I was curious, as I didn't know why it was lucky either. So, I looked it up, both Celtic traditions and Norse mythology have associate acorns with good luck. Such as protecting homes from thunder, it's fertility and abundance, and I think it's more sacred than lucky, but the wisdom of an old oak tree, indirectly, I feel sacredness brings luck.

    "Damn, did his mother sprinkle sugar on him at birth? What kind of dog luck is this?"
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    DxD Multiverse: My Dating Sim System
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz12d
    Commented

    sounds like a good plan

    that will result in other people who are greedy for his powers would start coming to the island and causing trouble, once the reports that Itogami Island is a constant attack, Japan or Asia will have no choice but to let Itogami Island from their control and declare Itogami island as a country, and when that happens I will reveal to the world that I am the 4th progenitor and will declare that itogami island will be my domain' Alex smiled at his plan.
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    STB: Runes and Vampires
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz12d
    Commented

    the glyph for a and o look very similar

    We can see Alex who is currently making a new storage ring, but this time is different, instead of a rune there are 2 groups of runes on the fist size metal sphere, the first one is ᛋᛈᚪᚳᛖ which can be translated to (space) the second is ᛋᛏᚩᚱᚪᚷᛖ which is also translated to (storage) Alex manage to improve his runes by translating a single rune into a letter and make them form words.
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    STB: Runes and Vampires
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz12d
    Commented

    so rather than what he needed unknowingly, it only gives what he specifically desired?

    Also, some of you may have noticed that the things the Sacred Gear is giving MC are a bit too specific and convenient. And no, that is not purely because of plot armour, it is intentional.
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    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz12d
    Commented

    German for "I love you" according to Google Translate.

    "ich liebe dich, sirin."
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    in the chat group, swap bodies with Alicia at the beginning?
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz13d
    Commented

    Silver hair... Maybe you can say that your father or mother was one of his lab rats, he wanted to reincarnate himself, but the fuinjutsu and jutsushiki (cursed technique) partially failed, and you instead are slowly inheriting his chakra, it's nature, and some knowledge? If you explain anything, that's the most sound, and that's if you explain anything... I mean, he invented bringing back the dead, why wouldn't he experimented to bring himself back? Maybe even suggest Tobirama even suspected Madara Uchiha to have done the same with Izanagi using his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, so he experimented the same? The only problem would be if someone reawakens Tobirama from the pure land and calls him out XD. Response: Tobirama then removed his memories, so that if that failed, he wouldn't reveal this even after the grave. Okay, maybe I am just having fun thinking of ideas.

    On top of that if he were to reveal Fuinjutsu, Spirit Transformation Technique and a bunch of jutsu only once used by Tobirama, anyone would be able to see that he has a problem.
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    Konoha: The Template System
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  • Skaviouz
    Skaviouz16d
    Commented

    How much is taken lul? Even 1% of nine-tails would be lots and lots of power... That's like equivalent to 11% of one-tails' power?

    As they shook hands, Yoichi thought, "Opportunity for a daily theft, activate!"
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