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the main thing that should be is why spiderman never learned martial arts.. he only fights with his senses. and being flexible..
Bro? Really?
Is that a word?
How bout bang hot actresses and date hot girls? Even better right?
Lindsey for me 😊
Can't take criticisms.. Tsk..
It messed up the mood of the readers. That will not go away..
Sooo? Your forcing it? Is that it? Even it very contradicting.. Well nvm its seems you don't listen to critics very well.. Even a lot people are commenting..
I 2nd.. Cautious? Why is he not doubting his losing control of his emotions when he was trained to do it for years.. Tsk..
It won't because it will not add up.. Emphasizing his training of mind magic under a grandmaster for years and he is a reincarnated character not a child.. His exaggerated defense and detection..and cant even feel or doubt? You made the early chapters become cr*p..
Dude please. Mc has an over exaggerated shield for occlumency that helps him for controlling emotions.. Now he is being affected by it? Really..? It seems the earlier chapter of studying with a grandmaster was no help? Before entering school he can already ward master level.. And he was a grown up on a child's body.. Don't just make a lame scenario.. Icy vault was ok. But seven deadly sins? That has something to do with emotions.. All his training in early chapters became useless.. And it was several chapters.. It is contradicting.. You add the elements, and it does not add up properly.. And he does not even notice it? Really? He was taught to use occlumency always.. Which means he should have control over emotions..
Hhaahahahahaha tf hahahahahaha
The steel pipe is 1.5 meters. So you know how long that is? I really find it confusing that most novels weapons are so long. It does not sound realistic
Elena. Selina went home to texas
Why is she called xiang? Really. I have seen this a few times already. Is it an error? Or is there an explanation i do not get.
Whatever you do, do not kill the dog!!!
Letter j is far from letter g on the keyboard
Aokiji and kuzan is one person only.