webnovel
avatar
0
Jomke86

Jomke86

Lv6
2017-05-09 JoinedGlobal
-h

of reading

600

Read books

Badges

5

Moments

48
  • Jomke86
    Jomke864mth
    Commented

    no in the books i am pretty sure potions was on friday, so it was literally one of the last classes he had first week. transfiguration was the first one, as they got late from sleeping.

    'Now not only Harry knows about Sirius Black 2 years early, but I have to deal with his questions as well. And wasn't Harry's first class potions, why are our timetables different than canon.' Many questions and changes 
    altalt
    Harry Potter: Ero World
    Book&Literature · light_novel_addict
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    +1 if its wednesday and luna ,

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Marvel x HP: Moses' Odd-venture
    Movies · 4give_NoobWriter
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    hm, didnt like the fact he offed Dudley, i mean he was a bully, but killing a child even if inderectly goes to far too dark . and death is just too quick, let them suffer in prison or in poverty , thats even worse then a quick mercy of death

    (A/N: What do you guys think about Harry's revenge?)
    altalt
    Whatever It Takes... [HP X MCU (AU) Fanfic]
    Movies · InGlorious
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    Its Theodeore Nott isnt it?

    He heard sounds of sniggering and found that Blaze Zabini and Theodore Knott were laughing at the blowjob comment. 
    altalt
    HP: The Arcane Thief
    Book&Literature · Snollygoster
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Posted

    Dont know if you got the okay from the original author , but so far , it seems to be a complete copy of Who Dares Wins from OlegGunnarsson in fanfiction Will check if there will be some original change and you only use the work as a basis for your own divergence, til then its just copy and paste.

    This book has been deleted.
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    +1 pov lily / james / sirius / remus / peter

    1) A quick Pov of Gryffindor watching the duel and their reactions, obviously I will continue the story from there.
    altalt
    Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)
    Movies · Shadow7Blue
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    Lyarra after his Grandmother

    Submit Suggestions:
    altalt
    The Weirwood Wolf ( Game of Thrones )
    TV · Telling_Tall_Tales
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    yeah pretty good idea there from GodBane

    Keep White Walkers:
    altalt
    The Weirwood Wolf ( Game of Thrones )
    TV · Telling_Tall_Tales
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    yeah thats kinda too much i feel like, even with his bone density and reslilient skin at 8 foot any more then 500 to 600 pounds, or 250 to 300 kilos whould be really weird.

    Not that those horses are something I could use personally as I'm not sure how much I weight exactly, but if I had to guess I'd say somewhere between 500 too 600 kilos.
    altalt
    A spacewolf in westeros
    TV · Love_dem_fanfix
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    wasnt Orichimaru the Jonin of Oto at this point, the Kazekage was still alive i think til later before the 3rd round. Or am i wrong?

    As Yami entered the 3rd tower, the similar fighting stage and the railing on the 1st floor came into view. It looked the same like in the canon. Hiruzen along with Orochimaru dressed as Kazekage were already seated at the podium. Iruka, Shikaku and a few Anbu's were standing alongside the two village heads.
    altalt
    Naruto: Uchiha's Genjutsu Demon
    Anime & Comics · lazarus898
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    oh please, after reading that i kinda wish they were in Harry Potter or Marvel instead, dont know why but the feeling just popped into my head.

    "Well, that's quite a good chunk of information. Good job, Naruto. I guess you are also worried about the last part, but I wouldn't think about that too much for now. Just because she doesn't know about it doesn't mean that it doesn't exist. Maybe there is some kind of secret society or hidden world or something like that. If it exists, I will dig it up, so there is no need to worry for now."
    altalt
    Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach
    Anime & Comics · Maerry
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    wouldnt that be 460 instead?

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Fallout Wastelander
    Video Games · PowerArmorGuy
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    didnt y flashback show sasuke awakened his sharingan the day of the uchiha massacre? that would be when he was 5 or 6 , wouldnt it?

    Even the most monstrous of geniuses like Itachi, Shisui, and Sasuke, were not able to awaken the sharingan at the young age of 6.
    altalt
    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
    Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke861yr
    Commented

    Nah, it goes back even way further, the only things friends stood out for was it mostly played in the apartment of them, seinfeld was more open in their settings. You could argue for Cheers, which mostly played in a bar, but pretty sure there a other sitcoms before that in the 70´s as well.

    The entire idea of a relatable sitcom was new, and just like how [Friends] had introduced the idea, in his previous reality, Will wanted it to retain the honour of doing so here as well.
    altalt
    My Hollywood System
    Movies · DreamThree
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke862yr
    Commented

    hm, i actually like the chapter quite a bit, you cannot have action all the time, the story and setting needs to be set up properly and any big improvements should be at least this flashed out to show how an MC got there and make it believeable.

    Ch 79 Soul
    altalt
    Mason Aves: The Wizard(Kinda Complete.. again)
    Movies · HelloDarkness07
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke862yr
    Commented

    yeah maybe would have been nice for suspence to not let us know if the new guys are spies or even just bad guys, i for one hardly remember season one at all, just the main plot a bit. i dont even remember when the strong fellow joined in the series i think tyrese was his name, i liked him a bit in the show.

    Ch 67 Chapter 67
    altalt
    The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
    TV · Xenon_graves
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke862yr
    Replied to Derkkill

    i think but i could be wrong he means thr trinity of mind, soul and body, which would make more sense here

    It was time to take the first step towards completing the Trinity.
    altalt
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke862yr
    Commented

    Natasha? typo for Kaname?

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot)
    Anime & Comics · shashank_bhatt
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke862yr
    Commented

    nice to see you back, i enjoy the setting , there are nearly zero walking dead fanfics ( which are at least good enough to keep reading). i am lazy in regards to comments, but i will try to post somethin once in a while to express my joy in reading your story.

    Ch 63 Chapter 63
    altalt
    The Unbound (Multiverse: The Walking Dead, Game of Thrones?)
    TV · Xenon_graves
    detail
  • Jomke86
    Jomke862yr
    Commented

    hm, this some foreshadowing how Quinn is gonna be "convinced" to go for mroe then one wife to let the West family grow?

    FictionOnlyReader - Author - The reason why Quinn accepted was that it was asked by his grandfather. He doesn't mistrust George at all. Quinn would have rejected if some asked him; he would have put it down if they asked him of a promise, essentially a blank cheque.
    altalt
    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
    Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
    detail