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(As expected of me) => search this line and delete all !!!

Can you verify the name of people at least? Leo is everywhere for an exemple ...

Marquis Haldir is not the supreme elder. Edit the wrong name at least

The story is really good, profound background and good characters. But, too many inconsistencies and mistakes. A serious need of editing. Also, stop extending the explanations to simply make more chapters please.

Leon kidnapped? Its fine, lets joke and waste time, he's the MC after all. Seriously ...

Can you edit and add the "in", "his", "her", "she", he" missing along all the chapters? Pls

Bad translation Full of teen clichés But have potential if the story and background can be improved.

Pay for this? No thanks. Good story but the writing ... Where is the second great mage chp 81?

He was already a novice at the final fight of the competition ... Check your storyline ...

With is no time, he has bits he needed. Edit pls ...

"There is a golden colour badge with symbols of hammer and flames with five golden stars beneath the number." " beneath the number 3", put the number at least ... The story is good but the writing absolutely need editing...

Seriously ... Just give him the power of the best overseer directly ... There is a problem of power ranking. He is rank 2 upper and cant even beat the champion goblin easily with all the power up he have. The story can be good, but i will not read the fight. I hope it will become better.

The two advanced class ... You said it yourself ^^

Last time i read the message of the author !!!! Why spoil seriously ...

Too Confusing, Level and Capacity Problem.

You continue to cut your story and never bring other content like Camilla. Its sad but i quit.

IT was, no Twas .... Make some editing please.

Need some editing

Chapter 475 : He go back in time and kill Luke in his god form. Try to re-read the chapter and take your words back on you ...