Knightolegend

correct, a truly barbaic way to do things

Onverall, a pretty good novel, the only thing that kinda sucks is that the powering level system is confusing as all get out. You might need an AUX chapter with the power levels and the life expectancy of each realm. Also there needs to be a better distinction on the different factions and races.

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Hey, I like the premise of the book, but you need to be clear on the different stages and different power systems, because it is currently confusing as all heck. Also you need to consolidate what you call each stage because the moment it’s all over the place.

wut?

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Bro, make up your mind on what you want to call the different stages, cause this crap is getting confusing

I know it’s to late, but the grammar and wording being used, is anything but offputting.

But you don’t know if there are hidden rules or conditions that doesn’t allow it to just bind to its host.