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FoolsAndDreams

FoolsAndDreams

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I am not interesting, not even in the slightest. But I am a fool who seeks to solve some of the greatest mysteries.

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  • FoolsAndDreams
    FoolsAndDreams6 months ago
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    This is just another MC creates games off of popular games (Journey)/movies(Wanted) in the original world and of course needs to put an eastern spin on everything to show nationalism. The setting of the world is that it is more militaristic, but also all battles in history took longer, and because of that artistry didn't really develop. Action games were the first type of games introduced to society instead of casual or roleplaying. And VR technology didn't develop towards using set spaces, instead everything is centered around the player like having an omnidirectional treadmill and a helmet that completely surrounds the player head to ensure audio and visual quality. So gamers are pretty much all rich people who are seeking stimulation (Don't try to question how streaming is still a thing if the entertainment industry supposedly barely exists). In comes the MC which has been mysterious gifted the knowledge of technology for neural based VR, a whole lot of military schematics of the future, and how to create a true AI on a basic computer. The military schematics are assembly schematics that don't include the power source or any weapons aka they are just designs. The MC is a someone who never went to college and was a keyboard warrior in his previous life. In this life he is a college student who never graduates, but is peers with the princess of Daxia (guessing the great leap forward never happened). The prior owner of the body made a valid remark towards a game company at an expo (which his class had been invited to attend with the princess) where they were presenting their latest headset. The remark was that the "new" technology was in reality just one or two things have been updated and a new name has been slapped onto it. The company decided use their fanboys, biased news stations, and a water army to attack him on social media because I guess that's how their PR team operates? This led to him being doxxed and eventually getting drunk and dying thereby letting the MC come into the world. The story begins with the MC facing off against that company and shortly after, forming his own studio/company for VR games. Translation seems mainly Mtl at the moment as simple errors like the common he/she mixup are present. Because the translation are machine, I can only say that the updates are average.

  • FoolsAndDreams
    FoolsAndDreams2 years ago
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    Characters are flat and lack a lot of qualities. Like intellect. The World is mainly built as it gets mentioned. i.e. we're only given the basics of world and the only part of the world that matters is where the mc is. There's no excess characters that exist, if a character is mentioned, they will play a part in the story. Mc's supposedly has average luck but rarely ever recieves equipment for other builds than his own. Minion system is more accurate name to system than training avatar as he doesn't treat the avatars as extensions of himself but as expendable minions to gather exp and items for him. I.e. "Everything goes as the MC wills it, he can do everything so why would it not"

  • FoolsAndDreams
    FoolsAndDreams2 years ago
    Replied to Lord_Buccaneer

    My problem with it is that it becomes terrible so quickly. I was like a gu system that's quite original, then 3 chapters later I said to myself this is a regular system the gu is just an addon. In addition, it has the mc was stupid and now is somehow smarter. 1 second he doesn't know how to raise his gu then the next chapter he knows how to raise a super gu. Not to mention it first said something along the lines of gu are the way to get stronger then says there's some more way out there. Lastly the author mentions things as they appear, no foreshadowing or anything of the like. Example: demon beasts.

  • FoolsAndDreams
    FoolsAndDreams2 years ago
    Posted

    Very bland. Good for reading to fill in spare time waiting for other things to update as characters and story are very 2D. The system itself is black tech but everything presented so far except some of the rewards are just breakthrough in current theoretical technology. In summary this would be more aptly be named "Overachiever's Sassy Theoretical Breakthrough System".