I agree, I'm tired of seeing harems where they shouldn't exist.

The plot of the story is interesting, but over time it becomes increasingly monotonous, the main MC seems to increasingly become more of an OP villain and won't have any challenges.

thanks for the chapter.

thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for chapter!!

Thanks for the chapter

Wow, what a disappointing update.wouldn't it be better to call it "Time Bullet" because it's too confusing to call it superhuman reflexes.

Wow, what a disappointing update.wouldn't it be better to call it "Time Bullet" because it's too confusing to call it superhuman reflexes.

I read up to chapter 65 and I don't know if I should continue. The story is certainly interesting, but the author's inexperience with his writing is a horror, this story needs serious revision. Attempts in chapters R-18 are terrible and the punctuation in the text is a mess, often you can't differentiate between what the characters thoughts and lines are or when the point of view changes.

this is a huge loss of potential to go this route without taking advantage of the other options. such as making a summer weather floor to attract residents.

author would be really cool if in the future there were floors with different climates. after all, it would be very boring and a waste of potential if everything were based on the element of ice. and the MC could get monsters of other attributes by trading with another dungeon.

author would be really cool if in the future there were floors with different climates. after all, it would be very boring and a waste of potential if everything were based on the element of ice. and the MC could get monsters of other attributes by trading with another dungeon.

I've read up to chapter 125 so I'll be honest in my opinion. I really like your idea for your story, but as well as having good successes, there are also mistakes. Mainly in grammar and continuity Example: in one chapter there was a character who clicked his tongue 5 times and the sighs: (Haaaaaa) seem like screams. It is very obvious that the author knows many Japanese, Korean and Chinese novels and brought some of his strengths to the novel, but he also brought his weaknesses like the personality of his protagonist.

I didn't understand why the need for black smoke. it doesn't make any sense!!

Thanks for chapter author-san

I thought it was cool your story really made me feel the DC universe, I just don't expect the MC to become a cold-blooded character. the only flaw in the story was doing a grammar review and having an English version would be nice and would have a lot more prominence.

I think Devansha is the name of ancestral class S. and bloodline is not your race.