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do you read what you have written before posting it?

couple of things. first please get an editor or someone to proof read. there are so many small typos or words that don't really make sense. like he is flinching his spy's. should be flexing. then words that should he plural but don't have an s at the end. also all the political stuff and the world building is nice. but we need to start on the mc sooner or atleast mention them every couple of chapters.

lmfaoooooooo wtf is that response. gotta be a cultural thing...

also i just noticed i completely skipped over the pervell bloodline. I always believed the Potter's were a branch family of the pervells due to having the invisibility cloak. I like to think that the reason the Potter's have one of the 3 deathly hollows was that it was passed down through their family.

It was the first book when harry went to gringotts it was written outside the bank. and no I'm not using ai. however I am using grammar to help me with my storry.

I appreciate it. I agree to a certain extent. I really did just have an idea while playing the game. and you're correct. I do like Grindelwald and always felt like there was a ton of options for him. please keep the suggestions coming.

house elves can live very long lives. its mentioned about kretcher that he had been in the family for generations

thank you for the feedback. I will address this in the next chapters

What do you think so far?